英文改错!速求.Last symmer I take a part-time job in the InternationalCamp for children .I have been told one more workerwill be needed this year and I think you are fit it .Howabout join us The camp is at the foot of a small hillclose to a rive

英文改错!速求.Last symmer I take a part-time job in the InternationalCamp for children .I have been told one more workerwill be needed this year and I think you are fit it .Howabout join us The camp is at the foot of a small hillclose to a rive
英文改错!速求.
Last symmer I take a part-time job in the International
Camp for children .I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are fit it .How
about join us The camp is at the foot of a small hill
close to a river .It is so a beautiful place!We can hear
birds singing happy all around .Everybody sleeps in tents,
that is very interesting.We usually work only five
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit
the area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable
experience.If you have interests in it ,reply to me soon.
是 summer 打错了、

英文改错!速求.Last symmer I take a part-time job in the InternationalCamp for children .I have been told one more workerwill be needed this year and I think you are fit it .Howabout join us The camp is at the foot of a small hillclose to a rive
我是高中英语老师,改了一下.
Last symmer I take(took) a part-time job in the International
Camp for children .I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are(去掉） fit it .How
about join（joining） us The camp is at the foot of a small hill
close to a river .It is so（such） a beautiful place!We can hear
birds singing happy（happily) all around .Everybody sleeps in tents,
that(which) is very interesting.We usually work only five
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time (to)visit
the area and have a(去掉a） fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable
experience.If you have interests（去掉s) in it ,reply to me soon.

Last summer I took a part-time job in the International Camp for children . I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are fit for it .How
about joining us ? The...

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Last summer I took a part-time job in the International Camp for children . I have been told one more worker
will be needed this year and I think you are fit for it .How
about joining us ? The camp is at the foot of a small hill,
close to a river .It is such a beautiful place! We can hear
birds singing happily all around . Everybody sleeps in tents,
which is very interesting. We usually work only five
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit
the area and have fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable
experience. If you are interested , reply to me soon.

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第一句take改为过去式took;第二句在worker后面加上that they ;第三句join改为joining;第四句在hill后面加上which is ;第五句把so改为 such；第六句把happy改为happily;第七句在把Everybody sleeps改为Everybody has sleep;第八句在time后加to;第九句在sure后加that；最后一句reply后加个it...

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第一句take改为过去式took;第二句在worker后面加上that they ;第三句join改为joining;第四句在hill后面加上which is ;第五句把so改为 such；第六句把happy改为happily;第七句在把Everybody sleeps改为Everybody has sleep;第八句在time后加to;第九句在sure后加that；最后一句reply后加个it

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