看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we

来源：学生作业帮助网编辑：六六作业网时间：2024/11/15 21:36:56

看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,Itwasafineday.IandmyfriendswenttovisitedtheGreatWall.ItwasveryfantasticwhenwesawtheGr

看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we
看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,
It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we ate Beijing Roasted Duck for dinner.it was very deliciuos.There were many peole,especially foreigners and the boss was very friendly to customer.At 5:00 Pm.We went back home.

看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we
It was a fine day.My friends and I went to visit the Great Wall.It was really fantastic the moment we saw it.First,we took some photos and then climbed the Great Wall.Besides,we had Bejing Roasted Duck for dinner and we all felt it was delicious.There were many people,especially foreigners and the boss was very friendly to customers.Finally,tired but happy,we went back home at 5:00p.m.

全部展开

It was a fine day. My friends and I went to visit the Great Wall . It was exciting to visit the Great Wall . First, we took some photos and climbed the Great Wall. We were tired but happy. we ate Beijing Roasted Duck for dinner. It was very deliciuos.There were many people including foreigners.The manager in the restaurant was very friendly to the customers. At 5:00 Pm, we went back home.
现在没有错误了。

收起

全部展开

It was a fine day. I and my friends went to visit the Great Wall . It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall . First we took some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,I was tired but happy. Next we ate Beijing Roasted Duck for dinner. it was very deliciuos.There were many people,especially foreigners and the boss was very friendly to customers.At 5:00 Pm. We went back home.

收起

看看这篇英语日记有何修改之处,It was a fine day.I and my friends went to visited the Great Wall .It was very fantastic when we saw the Great Wall .First we taken some photos and then climbed the Great Wall ,it was tired but happy.Next we 帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错,帮我修改一下麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,看看哪些地方有错误麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文（初三水平）,看看哪里有错误,可以怎样提高想让英语好的朋友帮帮修改修改我写的这篇作文,看看有哪些语法之类的错误,麻烦改正过来!It's best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that study language in a good environment.But doe 帮我看看这篇英文演讲稿我是初一的有不好的地方麻烦帮我修改一下.谢谢主题是英语　English is an important language in the world.Learning it is good for us. It’s necessary to learn it well. Different people have 看看这篇六年级英语日记有没有错或者意见Today was a sunny day.So,I went to play badminton with my friends after school,It was very good. The end,I was the winner,I was very happy. At about five o clock. I went my home,and do my home 帮我看看这是语法问题沛公则置车骑项王则受壁,置之座上.他们的含义有何不同寻找英语名词性从句 ,帮我看看这题目有没有做错的? 有错的顺便修改一下，修改病句这篇日记对我产生了兴趣英语作文修改,帮我看看这篇作文有什么问题No absenceNowadays,it is a normal phenomenon that students late for class,even absence from class on many university campus .Where they are?Some are still in bed,while ohers play computer game 能不能帮我看看自己写的英语小作文有什么错误之处, 帮忙修改英文演讲稿请英语好的帮忙修改一下看看有没有错误的地方,如果可以, 麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,看看哪里语法或者词组用错了 12篇暑假英语日记有翻译英语作文,帮我看看有没有语法错误和用词不当的,以及怎样修改,）请英语高手帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文～如题.看看有没有什么语法错误或语句不通顺什么的.晚上八点之前,好的话加分,拜托了(>_ 帮忙修改下英语日记.完全是自学英语,所以尝试着写一些英语日记.我知道里面有很多错误,This morning,I went to Vegetable market with my wife.We always go to same place to shopping.Here's the thing,(this is how it happene