帮忙修改一份自我介绍Good morning,everyone,Here I 'll introduce myself.My name is xx.You can call me xx.I am coming eighteen.I am changeable,just like the weather.Sometimes I'm cheerful but sometimes I'm gloomy.There are 4 people in my famil

帮忙修改一份自我介绍Good morning,everyone,Here I 'll introduce myself.My name is xx.You can call me xx.I am coming eighteen.I am changeable,just like the weather.Sometimes I'm cheerful but sometimes I'm gloomy.There are 4 people in my famil
帮忙修改一份自我介绍
Good morning,everyone,Here I 'll introduce myself.My name is xx.You can call me xx.I am coming eighteen.I am changeable,just like the weather.Sometimes I'm cheerful but sometimes I'm gloomy.There are 4 people in my family,including my father,my mother my elder sister and me.I have lots of hobbies,such as reading,singing traveling and so on and I like the Internet and pop music alone in my home.I especially like traveling.Because there’s an old Chinese saying:"It's better to travel 10000 miles than to read 10000 books."So,traveling really opens you eyes to other cultures.About study,I am not good at math and English.But they are important subject.I must work hard with them.Therefore it is a very annoying.Although my English is very poor,I still want to study well.After graduation,I want to continue my study.If I can,I will not go to the local university.I prefer to choose university,where are the mainland of china.In the future,I wish I will speak English well.
可以帮我修一修改吗?我想尽量再口语化点~还有~好像还不够长~我还能作些什麼上去呢?

帮忙修改一份自我介绍Good morning,everyone,Here I 'll introduce myself.My name is xx.You can call me xx.I am coming eighteen.I am changeable,just like the weather.Sometimes I'm cheerful but sometimes I'm gloomy.There are 4 people in my famil
Good morning,everyone,I will be introducing myself today.My name is xx.You may call me xx.I will be turning eighteen soon.I'm one whose emotion changes easily.I can be cheerful sometimes but gloomy at other times.There are a total of 4 members in my family,which includes my father,mother,elder sister and me.Since I am the youngest in the family,they pamper me a lot.I have a lot of hobbies,for example reading,singing,and traveling and so on.Out of so many hobbies,I like to travel the most as there’s an old Chinese saying:"It's better to travel 10000 miles than to read 10000 books." So,traveling really opens your eyes to the world.On top of that,I like to surf the net and listen to pop music alone at home.Regarding my studies,I am not good at English and Maths.But they are important subjects,so I must work hard in order to pull up my grades.Therefore it is very annoying.After graduation,I wish to continue my study.If I have a choice,I will not go to the local university.I would like to choose a foreign university.I hope that I can speak English more fluently in future.

Good morning, everyone. Here i will introduce myself. My name is xx. You can call me xx. I am nearly eighteen. I change alot, just like the wheather. Sometimes I'm cheerful and sometimes I'm gloomy. T...

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Good morning, everyone. Here i will introduce myself. My name is xx. You can call me xx. I am nearly eighteen. I change alot, just like the wheather. Sometimes I'm cheerful and sometimes I'm gloomy. There are 4 people in my family, my father, my mother, my "older" sister and me. I have many hobbies, such as reading,singing,travelling and so on. I also liked to go on the Internet and I love listening to pop music alone at my house. The most thing that i like to do is travelling, because there's an old Chinese saying: " It's better to travel 10000 miles than to read 10000 books." So travelling really does open your eyes to other cultures. About study, I am not good at Math and English, although they are the main subjects,well I gotta work hard.Even know that they are really annoying. My English is very poor,so i need o study well. After the graduation,i would want to continue my study. If i can, I will not go to the local university,because I prefer to choose an university where they are at the mainland of China. I the future, I wish I can inproof my English skills.

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