可以帮我改下语法错误吗?英语 作文以下是 我的作文The film ‘Les yeux sans visag’e is a relic of black-and-white cult filmin 1960s.The story theme is not new,but it is one of the most graceful andvisually sumptuous horror films.

可以帮我改下语法错误吗?英语 作文以下是 我的作文The film ‘Les yeux sans visag’e is a relic of black-and-white cult filmin 1960s.The story theme is not new,but it is one of the most graceful andvisually sumptuous horror films.
可以帮我改下语法错误吗?英语 作文
以下是 我的作文
The film ‘Les yeux sans visag’e is a relic of black-and-white cult film
in 1960s.The story theme is not new,but it is one of the most graceful and
visually sumptuous horror films.The film has a great cinematography that
images it creates are disturbing and beautiful.The most feature parts of this
movie are music and frames of movie.Although it is a black and white (no color) movie,expressive sumptuous of frames is given a feeling of sense of cold,I will emerge a cold color in my mind.The rhythms of the film just right at point,air of nervous and excite are given its proper due.The background music is giving me a weird feeling,a kind of kooky circus-like music that I cannot describe.The some scenes are very bloody and disturbing that made me want to see more because that is why I like cult film,bloods and skins are looks real when the doctor is cutting the face by scalpel.

可以帮我改下语法错误吗?英语 作文以下是 我的作文The film ‘Les yeux sans visag’e is a relic of black-and-white cult filmin 1960s.The story theme is not new,but it is one of the most graceful andvisually sumptuous horror films.
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第一句不佳 把句首The film去掉
第二句story去掉 可以与第一句结合 ,whose theme is not new however is of the most graceful and visually sumptuous horror.
后面问题很多,我直接给你修改吧 并且给你稍微润色一下：
In the film,a popular cinematography creats disturbing but beautiful images.Music is perfect and makes the movie more special and attractive.With a kooky circus-like music,I t gives the audience a feeling of weirdness and out of description.Further more,with black and white as the movie's main key,the movie is sensed with a feeling of coldness,mistery,nervousness,excitement and sudden conflict.Besides,the bloody and complicated scenes in the movie made me want to stick in my seat and see more about what's going on and how the figures develop in the movie.
There are more reasons why I am a big fun of cult film,however among them the scene of bloody ,dark atmosphere ,doctor with a scalpel to cut someone in the face,such kind of scenes are the main reason .
自己匆忙之间修改的,希望有用吧.楼下的也辛苦了 .文章毕竟写的很长.