hey,boy,where are you going?.....sorry,I don't konw.oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go........you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....
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hey,boy,where are you going?.....sorry,I don't konw.oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go........you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....
hey,boy,where are you going?
.....sorry,I don't konw.
oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go.
.......
you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?
...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....can you teach me that?
....no,it's a pity that I can't.you have to learn it by yourself.
谢谢1L君的回答，咱感激不尽~
作为一个中学生写英文是很痛苦的，咱能不能跟你私聊慢慢请教，请你多多包涵。
hey,boy,where are you going?.....sorry,I don't konw.oh,that's ok...everyone stay at here because they haven't known where to go........you are sad,aren't you?I guess the cause,ah,may be a lady?...no,I'm sad just because I don't know how to forget....
.sorry,I don't konw.
逻辑上很少如此.
改成
Well,just lingering here.
后面的“everyone stays ”也不好,如果真要说,用Everybody,动词吗,当然单数第三人称了.
第二段勉强吧.典型的国人式思维吧.
here是副词，前面不加介词的，所以不能有at,stay要加s,还有，如果把known改成decided,貌似会更好