帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法错误There ever was a small village of which the church clock suddenly stopped somehow .The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night had alreadly been a part of villagers' life.So this made the vi

帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法错误There ever was a small village of which the church clock suddenly stopped somehow .The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night had alreadly been a part of villagers' life.So this made the vi
帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法错误
There ever was a small village of which the church clock suddenly stopped somehow .The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night had alreadly been a part of villagers' life.So this made the villagers disturbed.But no one could explain why the matter happened.Decided to repair the clock from being silent ,the vicar climbed into the clock tower,only to find that the clock had been invaded by bees .In evidence,it was the bees that made home her so that the clock was filled with honey and wax.The vicar felt obliged to have the clock cleaned.But the hot potato really made the vicar in a corner,how to remove the bees which might attack humans with their sharp stings.Suddenly ,an idea struck him----a bee keeper might help.Therefore a bee keeper was called on the spot.The experienced man removed the queen bee,to the vicar's surprise,the other bees followed the queen bee all the way out of the church.Finally the clock was cleaned.It was really pleased for the villagers to hear the clock striking hour after hour.

帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法错误There ever was a small village of which the church clock suddenly stopped somehow .The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night had alreadly been a part of villagers' life.So this made the vi
Having decided to repair the clock from being silent
only found the clock had been invaded by bees
it was the bees that made home here
The vicar felt obliged to have the clock cleaned,but how to remove the bees which might attack humans with their sharp stings?This hot potato really made the vicar in a corner.
The villagers were really pleased to hear the clock striking hour after hour.
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