请帮我改一下这段英文,要改下语法,用词,标点符号,最好句型也改好一点In the nineteenth century,at this period,women were the weak group of people so they usually didn’t have much freedom and choice to pursue their happiness

请帮我改一下这段英文,要改下语法,用词,标点符号,最好句型也改好一点In the nineteenth century,at this period,women were the weak group of people so they usually didn’t have much freedom and choice to pursue their happiness
请帮我改一下这段英文,要改下语法,用词,标点符号,最好句型也改好一点
In the nineteenth century,at this period,women were the weak group of people so they usually didn’t have much freedom and choice to pursue their happiness.In fact,they were mostly dominated by their husbands and thus lived in a constrained way,which makes those women miserable throughout their entire lives.Nevertheless,in Mellissa Hardy’s story “The Heifer”,the main character,Aina,was a strong,independent,and adventurous woman who dared to strive for her life; unlike many other women,when Aina wanted something,she went after it.In this way,she should be considered as a hero.Her actions of starting a new life in Canada and killing her husband were just like an adventure which could prove us that she was a hero whom we should admire for her courage in pursuit of her own happiness.

请帮我改一下这段英文,要改下语法,用词,标点符号,最好句型也改好一点In the nineteenth century,at this period,women were the weak group of people so they usually didn’t have much freedom and choice to pursue their happiness
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In the nineteenth century,(at this period,)women were a vulnerable group
in society (the weak group of people) so they usually didn't have much freedom
and choice to pursue their happiness.In fact,they were mostly dominated
by their husbands and thus lived in a constrained way,which made (makes)
those women miserable throughout their entire lives.Nevertheless,in Mellissa
Hardy's story ¨The Heifer〃,the main character,Aina,was a strong,independent,
and adventurous woman who dared to strive for her life; unlike many other
women,when Aina wanted something,she went after it.In this way,she should
be considered as a heroine (hero).Her actions of starting a new life in
Canada and killing her husband were just like an adventure which could prove
to us (us) that she was a hero whom we should admire for her courage in
pursuit of her own happiness.
注：
(1) weak group没有问题,但在这方面较常用的表达是 vulnerable(脆弱,用於弱
势社群)
(2) main character 可考虑用protagonist
(3) Mellissa Hardy是不是 Melissa Hardy?
写得简洁流畅
错处也少
只是小心一点
应可避免
但想提的一点是
文中提及killing her husband...like an adventure...was a hero (heroine)...\x14
把杀夫说成英雄并非绝对不可
只是应当花点笔墨略为解释当中的原因
以取得没有阅读原著的读者的认同

Please leave Shauna read Carl's Newsweek magazine since Carl has already wrote his report.
Please在句首，所以大写
Shauna Carl是人名 ，要大写
Newsweek 是杂志名，也要大写
这句话是说 只要卡尔写完他的报告，就让肖娜看卡尔的每周新闻。

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In the nineteenth century, at thattime, women were the weak group of people so they usually didn’t have much freedom and many choices to pursue their own happiness. In fact, they were mostly dominated by their husbands and thus lived in a constrained way, which made those women miserable throughout their entire lives. Nevertheless, in Mellissa Hardy’s story “The Heifer”, the main character, Aina, was a strong, independent, and adventurous woman who dared to strive for her life,unlike many other women, when Aina wanted something, she went after it. In this way, she should be considered as a heroine. Her actions of starting a new life in Canada and killing her husband were just like an adventure which could prove us that she was aheroine whom we should admire for her courage in pursuit of her own happiness.

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