谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等dear sir we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions,including Europe,America ,which

谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等dear sir we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions,including Europe,America ,which
谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等
dear sir
we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions,including Europe,America ,which due to the Premium quality and competitive price ,we learn that you just in need of XXXX so i am here write to show you our products ,please feel free to let me know if you interested in it or you have any
question,Beside if you in need of any other slimier products you could send us the picture,we would do our utmost to make it for you ,I do wish to establish business relation with you ,
looking forward your early reply and submit our quotation to you soon
best regards
please visit www.XXXXX.com for more information

谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等dear sir we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions,including Europe,America ,which
1.manufacture-- 修改成 manufacturer 生产商
2.in XXX city in china -- 修改成 in xxx city,China.
3.which due to - 修改成 becauase of the premium quality and competitive price.(句号）
4.we learn that you just in need of XXXX so i am here write -- 修改成 we learned that you are just in need of XXXX so i am here writing
5.if you interested - 修改成 if you are interested
6.or you have any question--- 修改成 any questions
7.Beside if you in need of ..slimier ..-- 修改成 Besides if you in need of any other similar
8.looking forward your early reply .-- 修改成 Looking forward to your earliest reply and we will submit...

Europe, America, are the continents rather than the countries, it should changes into Egypt, United States, if you want to use "countries"
so i am here to write to show you about our products.plea...

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Europe, America, are the continents rather than the countries, it should changes into Egypt, United States, if you want to use "countries"
so i am here to write to show you about our products.please feel free and let me know if you are interested about it or have any question.
Beside,if you are in need of any other similar you could send us pictures. we would do the best service.
looking forward your early reply and submiting our .....
by the way, the www.xxxxx.com is a adalt website.
what a shame!

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Dear sirs,

We are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in China .Our products sell themselves well in more than 20 countries and regions, including Europe, America, which ...

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Dear sirs,

We are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in China .Our products sell themselves well in more than 20 countries and regions, including Europe, America, which is due to the high quality and competitive price. We know that you are just in need of XXXX. We would like to introduce our products to you. Please let me know if you interested in our products or you have any
questions. Besides, if you are in need of any other slimier products, you can send us pictures. We would like to do our utmost to design and produce them for you. We do wish to establish business relation with you.
Looking forward your reply.
Best regards,
XXX
please visit www.XXXXX.com for more information

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dear sir

we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions, including Europe, America ,which due to the ...

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dear sir

we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions, including Europe, America ,which due to the Premium quality and competitive price ,we learned that you just in need of XXXX so i am here writing to show you our products ,please feel free to let me know if you are interested in them or you have any
questions,Besides if you are in need of any other slimier products you could send us the picture,we would do our best to make it for you ,I do wish to establish business relations with you ,
looking forward to your early reply and submit our quotation to you soon
best regards
please visit www.XXXXX.com for more information

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