我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误Good morning teachers i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i

我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误Good morning teachers i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i
我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误
Good morning teachers
i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i like smile
in my spare time i like to read novels,i often buy some books and magzines to read .i enjoy the reading time .and i think reading could enlarge my knowdge
i am fond of music my favorite band is sodagreen ,their music feel so cosy and i like english ,too .i think language is very interesting and useful .Although my english is not good enough but i will study hard.i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
then ,i will talk about my family .There are 3 people in my family .my mother my father and i .My family is pretty good.I love my sweet warm home.
that 's all thanks
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我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误Good morning teachers i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i
1.建议：It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview.
2.错误：“.And ”---去掉and,另起一句或接前句.
3.I am a happy girl and a girl of character.I smile a lot / I smile to everyone I meet.
4.另起一段（爱好）：I like reading very much and I buy books、magzines quite often.Reading not only enlarges my knowdge,but also brings a great enjoyment to me.I am also fond of music.My favorite band is sodagreen,their music makes me feel so cosy.
5.另起一段（学习）：I learn English hard,I think it is very interesting and useful.Although my English is not very good at present,I would try my best to learn it well,no matter how difficult it will be.
6.Also,allow me to introduce my family to you.My family is a typical family of three people:my father,my mother and me.I have a happy family and I love them very much.(可以适当介绍下你父母是做什么的,)
That 's all.
Thanks for your listening.
————你的内容比较少,毕竟是interview,多准备一点说的东西,掐好时间,表达的句式尽量多样化.

语法基本正确～
their music feels~~~
这自我介绍写的太浅了，太简单～，多看点书，每句话都以：I …… ，my ……开头可不好～

Good morning teachers
I am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
My name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a character, cheerful girl .An...

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Good morning teachers
I am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
My name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a character, cheerful girl .And i like smile
In my spare time i like to read novels, i often buy some books and magazines to read .i enjoy the reading time .and i think reading could enlarge my knowledge
I am fond of music my favorite band is soda green, their music feel so cozy and i like English, too. I think language is very interesting and useful .Although my English is not good enough but i will study hard. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
then , i will talk about my family .There are 3 people in my family .my mother my father and i 。My family is pretty good. I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all thanks
这是我改过后的文章，你有点拼写错误，语法好像没有。你看看吧

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1.第一句for your interview不通
改成attending this interview
2.I am a girl with distinct charactericstics and positive sipirit.你这句时态不对
3.reading 就可以了，不用加novels整句改为
i like reading and i usually...

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1.第一句for your interview不通
改成attending this interview
2.I am a girl with distinct charactericstics and positive sipirit.你这句时态不对
3.reading 就可以了，不用加novels整句改为
i like reading and i usually enjoy novels and magazines during my spare time.
4.My favorite band is greensoda for their cozy music.
5.后面喜欢英语另外起句，不要用and跟前面连一起
6.Although后面不用but了，英语没这用法
7.my mother, father and I，不用再加my了
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改完了，其实没多少语法错误，只是文章显得比较中式英语，需要帮你改得更通顺更高级点的话HI我嘛～希望对你有帮助

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i like smile 应为smiling
knowdge 应为knowledge
their music feel ——feels
3 people -3members更好一点但是没有语法错误

i like smiling或i like to smile，不是i like smile。
their music feel......，feel后面应该加-s。
其他的应该就没什么了！