帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdl

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdl
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdly,remember to turn off the tap.Forthly,do not use the plastic bag.It is can not be reused.Fifthly,try using both sides of the paper.The last way of savingour environment is sorting garbage into glass,plastic,paper……
It is our duty to make our environment more and more beautiful in the future
初二英语考试的时候写的10分满分，一个错误一分看看能减几分
注：classroom,environment打错了,can not是can't,第三行是it can't be reused

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误There are some ways on saving our enironment:firstly,we can go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise.Secondly,we must turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room.Thirdl
国际惯例,所有的文章先过一遍英文纠错工具,见图：

我看了下,软件基本都改的是对的,就是第二遍修改的时候会发现on改成to以后,saving要改成save.


接下来,来说一些语法正确,但是写的还不够好的地方：
1. 你的firstly, secondly都有主语we引导,但是后面开始没有主语了,不一致.
2. forthly, the plastic bag 后面可以用which引导从句,把后面那句连起来.
3. fifthly那句 其实 paper并不是特指的,用the不合适.
4. sorting garbage后面可以再加上and recycling them
大致的看是这些,具体的可以再修改,因为不知道这篇文章要求的程度（小学,初中,高中,大学）所以也没法说的很到位.

第一行 some ways of
不是用on
别的好像没错

第一行ways on saving习惯上说ways of saving 或 ways to save
第二行的classroom拼写错误。
第三行应为Fourth（第四） 而不是forth（向前；向外）
第三行末尾“It is can not be ”中is去掉。因为系动词和情态动词不连用。
第五行省略号最好改为and so on.（等等）

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第一行ways on saving习惯上说ways of saving 或 ways to save
第二行的classroom拼写错误。
第三行应为Fourth（第四） 而不是forth（向前；向外）
第三行末尾“It is can not be ”中is去掉。因为系动词和情态动词不连用。
第五行省略号最好改为and so on.（等等）

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the last way of saving our environment is to sort garbage into ....

1,some ways of saving our environment
2,英语不用冒号，environment后改为句号.
3,classroom打错了
4,when we leave后面不用再加the room，显得累赘了
5,fourthly“第四”拼错了
6,塑料袋后面那一句，去掉is。It can not be reused.
7,英语...

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1,some ways of saving our environment
2,英语不用冒号，environment后改为句号.
3,classroom打错了
4,when we leave后面不用再加the room，显得累赘了
5,fourthly“第四”拼错了
6,塑料袋后面那一句，去掉is。It can not be reused.
7,英语省略号貌似不是6个点吧？可以改为glass, plastic,paper and so on或者etc.
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Forthly,do not use the plastic bags.They can not be reused.Fifthly,try to use both sides of the paper.The last way of saving our environment is sorting garbage into glass,plastic,paper……

way of

没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我 会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.
后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号 就行。2.中间有很多小句子，要以合并到一起，如：we can g...

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没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我 会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.
后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号 就行。2.中间有很多小句子，要以合并到一起，如：we can go to school on foot, it's kind of exercise and for free. 3. must这种词在这种文章中不是轻易用，有强迫的味道，你可以改成提议的口气，如we should trun off the lights
4. plastic bag那， do not use the plastic bag since it's not recyclable 你用的是reused不好说吧，超市的袋子 我就用好几次呢，应该说不能回收利用比较合理。

最后，It is can not be reused中两个谓语合适么？去掉is。
如果初中高一什么的写成这样，相当不错了

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There are some ways on saving our enironment:
1. Go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise;
2. Turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room;
3. Remember ...

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There are some ways on saving our enironment:
1. Go to school on foot.It is free and it is a kind of exercise;
2. Turn off the lights of our classroonm when we leave the room;
3. Remember to turn off the tap;
4. Abandon plastic bag as it takes a long time for them to dissolve;
5. Use double sides of the paper;
6. Recycle the garbage by classifying them into different catogory;
It is our duty to make our environment more and more beautiful in the future

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