帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误In our English class,there is a boy who is 13 years old.He is not recognized by any other.Everybody calls his nickname:geek.He’s 5 feet 2 I suppose.He has a lot of acnes in his face,and two big ears,two

帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误In our English class,there is a boy who is 13 years old.He is not recognized by any other.Everybody calls his nickname:geek.He’s 5 feet 2 I suppose.He has a lot of acnes in his face,and two big ears,two
帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误
In our English class,there is a boy who is 13 years old.He is not recognized by any other.Everybody calls his nickname:geek.He’s 5 feet 2 I suppose.He has a lot of acnes in his face,and two big ears,two eyes with glasses,a short hair ,thick lips,a big hand.A big feet and A big stomach.And how does everybody think of him?Lily said:No one knows him.in chinese is:他踏入红尘外无人知晓.Jerry said:Living a new centrey of wonderful textbooks.in chinese is:活生生的新时代奇葩教科书Steve said:Experience geek philosophy .in chinese is:用生命实践奇葩理念.Maria said:He is dare to refute,we can't answer his questions sometimes.He sometimes makes our happy,sometimes let us dumbfounding.in chinese is :他是一个敢于反驳的人,他是一个问出问题没人能回答出来的人.他有时带来欢笑,有时让我们挺纠结.Rodriga said:He is a lovely boy,the most lovely boy,more lovely than any other!in chinese is:他是一个可爱的人,他是一个很可爱的人,他是一个最可爱的人!

帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误In our English class,there is a boy who is 13 years old.He is not recognized by any other.Everybody calls his nickname:geek.He’s 5 feet 2 I suppose.He has a lot of acnes in his face,and two big ears,two
第一句话有点啰嗦.可改为“there is a 13-year-old boy.
第二句是想表达什么呢?是说他的名字没有一个人记得么,大家记得的是他的绰号?如果是这样,可改为“No one remembers his name.”因为recognize的意思是to know who sb is or what sth is when you see or hear them,because you have seen or heard them or it before.认识,认出,辨别出.第四句改为5.2 feet.第五句acne不可数名词,应去掉“s”；hair不可数,去掉“s”；hand、feet是可数,加上“s”；此外,这句话太长,最好将其分为几句话来写.接着,下一句可改为：He is a living wonderful work of the new century textbook.然后,下一句可改为：He explains the concept of the wonderful work with his own life.下面一句：讲is dare to改为dare to.讲our改为us(用宾格).