帮我看看这篇作文有语法上的错误吗.Last weekend ,I had picnic with my parents.We went to a countryside.We took some sandwiches and some bottle of water.Of course,I didn't forget to take some snacks.At 8:0 am,we came to a nice place.It w

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帮我看看这篇作文有语法上的错误吗.Lastweekend,Ihadpicnicwithmyparents.Wewenttoacountryside.Wetooksomesandwichesandsom

帮我看看这篇作文有语法上的错误吗.Last weekend ,I had picnic with my parents.We went to a countryside.We took some sandwiches and some bottle of water.Of course,I didn't forget to take some snacks.At 8:0 am,we came to a nice place.It w
帮我看看这篇作文有语法上的错误吗.
Last weekend ,I had picnic with my parents.We went to a countryside.We took some sandwiches and some bottle of water.Of course,I didn't forget to take some snacks.
At 8:0 am,we came to a nice place.It was near a river.The weather was hot,so I wanted to swim.The water made me refreshed.My parents talked under the tree.
About one hour later,wo took out the foot and had our picnic under the tree.I chated with my parents.There was smile on everyone's face.I was really happy,because my parents were always busy.
I gained happiness from this picnic.I think this is a good way to get on better with parents.
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Last weekend ,I had a picnic with my parents.We went to the countryside.We took some sandwiches and a few bottles of water.Of course,I didn't forget to take some snacks.
At 8:0 am,we came to ...

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Last weekend ,I had a picnic with my parents.We went to the countryside.We took some sandwiches and a few bottles of water.Of course,I didn't forget to take some snacks.
At 8:0 am,we came to a nice place,which was near a river.The weather was hot,so I wanted to have a swim in it .The water of the river made me refreshed.My parents were talking under the tree.
About an hour later,we took out the food and had our picnic under the tree.I chatted with my parents.There was smiles on everyone's face.I was really happy,because my parents were always happy.
We had a wonderful time and gained happiness from this picnic.I think this is a good way to get on well with parents.
改了不少地方，时态的地方 My parents were talking under the tree.用进行时显得生动。

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