这篇英语作文有什么错误地方,请指出.dear lucy:I'm sorry,I can't visit your party.My mather and my father have a meeting.They can't go home of three days.so!I should care for my grandmather.She is ill and she can't do the housework.So,I

这篇英语作文有什么错误地方,请指出.dear lucy:I'm sorry,I can't visit your party.My mather and my father have a meeting.They can't go home of three days.so!I should care for my grandmather.She is ill and she can't do the housework.So,I
这篇英语作文有什么错误地方,请指出.
dear lucy:
I'm sorry,I can't visit your party.My mather and my father have a meeting.They can't go home of three days.so!I should care for my grandmather.She is ill and she can't do the housework.So,I Instead of she do some housework and cooking.And i should study for the test.Because i have a English test in next week.The last .I hope you have a good time in your party.
Your best frend:li li

这篇英语作文有什么错误地方,请指出.dear lucy:I'm sorry,I can't visit your party.My mather and my father have a meeting.They can't go home of three days.so!I should care for my grandmather.She is ill and she can't do the housework.So,I
开头称呼：Dear Lucy,
正文：I'm sorry I can't come to your party.My parents have a meeting and they are out for three days.My grandmother is ill ,so I must take good care of her and help with all the housework.What's more,I should prepare for my English test in the next week.It's a pity that I couldn't join your party,but I hope you will have a good time during your party.
结尾：Your best friend,
Lili

a English test in next week : an English test next week
visit your party : come to your party
go home of three days : go home for three days
Instead of she Instead ofher

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Dear Lucy,
Hope every thing goes on well(第一句需要是问候语，e，写一句How are you 也可以)
I'm sorry that I can't visit you(或join your party).My mother and father (用 my par...

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Dear Lucy,
Hope every thing goes on well(第一句需要是问候语，e，写一句How are you 也可以)
I'm sorry that I can't visit you(或join your party).My mother and father (用 my parents多好……)are having a meeting and they can't go home in three days.So,I have to take care of my grandmother.She is ill and can't do housework,so I have to do the housework and cook instead of her. And I must study for the test because I have an English test next week.
I hope you have a good time with your party.
Your best friend, LiLi

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I'm sorry that I couldn't visit your party. My parents are now having a meeting. So they won't go home in three days. As a result, I should take care of my grandmother. Because of her illness, I shoul...

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I'm sorry that I couldn't visit your party. My parents are now having a meeting. So they won't go home in three days. As a result, I should take care of my grandmother. Because of her illness, I should do some housework and cooking for her. At the same time, I should study for the English test next week. At last, wish you have a great time at your party.

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visit改为join ， care前加上take，she do改为doing，the last改为at last或the end

帮你改了一下语法：
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry I can't attend your party. 【在这里用 attend 比较适合。只有 attend a party 没有 visit a party】 My mother and father have a meeting and won't be home for three days. 【在这里我帮你把两个...

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帮你改了一下语法：
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry I can't attend your party. 【在这里用 attend 比较适合。只有 attend a party 没有 visit a party】 My mother and father have a meeting and won't be home for three days. 【在这里我帮你把两个句子连了起来，读起来比较顺。还有 mather 应该是 mother】Since my grandmother is ill, I will be taking care of her and doing the housework. 【Housework 已经包括 cooking - 做饭- 所以不用再特意加上 cooking】Also, I have a English test coming up next week so I have to study. 【帮你把句子顺了一下，然后语法稍微改了改。记住句子不要用 because 开头】 I hope you have a good time at your party! 【英文里一般都说 have a good time 【at】 the party 没有 【in】 the party 这种说法】
Your best friend,
Li Li
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Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry I can't attend your party. My mother and father have a meeting and won't be home for three days. Since my grandmother is ill, I will be taking care of her and doing the housework. Also, I have a English test coming up next week so I have to study. I hope you have a good time at your party!
Your best friend,
Li Li
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