请英语高手来帮我找找这篇英文文章的语法的错谢谢!Later in the afternoon the boys put up there tent in the middle of the forest.A s soon as this was done they are all fell headache and want to sleep.So they creep into their tent a

请英语高手来帮我找找这篇英文文章的语法的错谢谢!Later in the afternoon the boys put up there tent in the middle of the forest.A s soon as this was done they are all fell headache and want to sleep.So they creep into their tent a
请英语高手来帮我找找这篇英文文章的语法的错谢谢!
Later in the afternoon the boys put up there tent in the middle of the forest.A s soon as this was done they are all fell headache and want to sleep.So they creep into their tent a shortly afterwards they are all slept soundly.In the middle of the night one of them woke up and heard the monster’s call he was very afraid he call at his friends woke up and rush out of the tent and climb up the trees.When the monster’s call was moving away ,they jumped down from the trees.Suddenly the monster’s call was moving quickly and near here of them .At that time they all say:“Oh my god!” They were told that the monster is injured in the call issued by the monkeys.It was a false alarm.

请英语高手来帮我找找这篇英文文章的语法的错谢谢!Later in the afternoon the boys put up there tent in the middle of the forest.A s soon as this was done they are all fell headache and want to sleep.So they creep into their tent a
Later in the afternoon the boys put up their tent in the middle of the forest.As soon as it's done they all had headache and wanted to sleep.So they crept into their tent a shortly afterwards they are all slept soundly.In the middle of the night one of them woke up and heard the monster’s call.He was very scared,so he called his friends woke up and rushed out of the tent and climbed up in the trees.When the monster’s roar was fading away ,they jumped down from the trees.Suddenly the monster’s roar was moving back quickly and became closer to them .At that time they all said:“Oh my god!” Later,they were told that the monster had got injured by the roar uttered by the monkeys.It was a false alarm.
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