希望帮我检查下语法句法错误There is a saying that nothing is as delicious as dumplings.It is extremely right.In Shenyang,there is an old restaurant called LaoBian dumpling.Founded in 1829,it has a long history of 181 years.In 2000,it is r

希望帮我检查下语法句法错误There is a saying that nothing is as delicious as dumplings.It is extremely right.In Shenyang,there is an old restaurant called LaoBian dumpling.Founded in 1829,it has a long history of 181 years.In 2000,it is r
希望帮我检查下语法句法错误
There is a saying that nothing is as delicious as dumplings.It is extremely right.In Shenyang,there is an old restaurant called LaoBian dumpling.Founded in 1829,it has a long history of 181 years.In 2000,it is recorded in Guinness World Records as the longest dumpling restaurant.The dumplings in LaoBian restaurant have thin wrapper and big stuffing and are famous for these two aspects.The Bians choose A-level pork and vegetables to make filling for dumplings.What’s more,they use bone broth to mix up stuffing.The owners of restaurant are also very considerate.They change vegetables in stuffing to suit for weather.For example,in summer,they use white gourd but Chinese cabbage in winter.In this way,dumplings are tasty and people from all over the world would like to savour them.

希望帮我检查下语法句法错误There is a saying that nothing is as delicious as dumplings.It is extremely right.In Shenyang,there is an old restaurant called LaoBian dumpling.Founded in 1829,it has a long history of 181 years.In 2000,it is r
there is an old restaurant called LaoBian dumpling改为there is an old restaurant which is called LaoBian dumpling house.外国人不一定能理解老边饺子是饭馆,所以应该加上house.
The dumplings in LaoBian restaurant have thin wrapper and big stuffing and are famous for these two aspects.改为The dumplings in LaoBian restaurant have thin wrapper and big stuffing and,of course,are famous for these two aspects.两个and使句子看起来失衡,用of course隔开,句子平衡.
The Bians choose A-level pork and vegetables to make filling for dumplings.改为A-level pork and vegetables are chosen to make filling in Bians.被动用法比较常见,原句读起来奇怪,也不符合翻译习惯.
They change vegetables in stuffing to suit for weather.改为
vegetables in stuffing are changing with weather.
they use white gourd but Chinese cabbage in winter.改为they use white gourd ,but Chinese cabbage in winter.but是连词,逗号必不可少.
改的不好 见谅

1.首先那个dish的名字,,写成soul cabbage braised vermicelli稍微好一些。
2.acid cabbage and vermicelli are the main materials and you can also add ginger, green Chinese onion, salt,grease, cutlet and vinegar. do no...

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1.首先那个dish的名字,,写成soul cabbage braised vermicelli稍微好一些。
2.acid cabbage and vermicelli are the main materials and you can also add ginger, green Chinese onion, salt,grease, cutlet and vinegar. do not doubt--you have to add vinegar although the soul cabbage is soul enough! it is really delicious and you will not want to stop once you have a try. it is very popular in the northeast of China and its popularity is getting greater with the fast spread of the culture of northeast of China in the world. now please have a taset the famous soul cabbage braised vericelli with the lines from a famous Chinese comic dialogue"Cui Hua, serve the soul cabbage."

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