我英文语法差 谁帮我改改英语作文...I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.obviously,is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.I feel like shopping on the int

我英文语法差 谁帮我改改英语作文...I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.obviously,is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.I feel like shopping on the int
我英文语法差 谁帮我改改英语作文...
I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.
obviously,is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.
they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.I feel like shopping on the
internet is necessary in our lives.Shopping on the internet has
many advantages,We don't have to bring any bags or drive a car to
supermarket just for a few things.It saves a lots of time.And we can
fined everything on the internet,so we don't have to look all over
the shop just for something special.
on the other hand,it also has some disadvantages,We don't
know the quality of items.And we don't know how is it really look
like.We can hardly choice the day we get the item.We must take
all this risks and pay for it.We can only imagine how is it look like,
how big is it,and how's the weight of it.
In my opinion,shopping on the internet is not necessary
We can find everything you need in the supermarket,shop or
somewhere else.Sometimes you see something special on the
internet,you really want it.But actually,you may not gonna use
it,and you just buy it,because using the computer is easier than
you go to the shop and sometimes talk to the shop assistance
It's turn you into a lost control person.until you get the item you
may say:"Oh!dear,I must lost my mind."
谁帮我改改.语法什么的...

我英文语法差 谁帮我改改英语作文...I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.obviously,is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.I feel like shopping on the int
语法和一些习惯用法掌握得不是很好,有些结构设置需要改进.但文章总体来说还行.等会,我给你改改.
I surely agree that shopping online is oh-so-teenager.Although My mother and father are in love with online shopping,and they even have a VIP card of the XX shop,I think that shopping on the internet is necessary in our lives could not bear much analysis.
There is no doubt that shopping online has many advantages.We,for example,don't have to bring any bags or drive a car to supermarket just for a few things.It can also save much time,because we can find everything on the internet,and we don't have to look all over the shop just for something special.As you see,it makes our live more convenient.
However,it also has some disadvantages.For example,we don't know the quality of products and we don't know how the product really looks,either.We can hardly choice the day to get the thing we want.We must take all these risks and pay for it.We can only imagine how it looks like,how big it is,and how the weight is.
I can hardly agree that shopping on the internet is not necessary.First,we can find everything you need in the supermarket,shop or somewhere else.In addition,sometimes you see something special on the internet,and you really want it.But actually,you are not going to use it.Many times when you get the products you may say:"Oh!dear,I must lost my mind."
注意细节和句语句之间的逻辑连接词

I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.
obviously,it is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.
they even have a VIP card of some shop.I feel like shoppi...

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I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.
obviously,it is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop.
they even have a VIP card of some shop.I feel like shopping on the
internet is necessary in our lives.Shopping on the internet has
many advantages,We don't have to take any bags or drive a car to a
supermarket just for a few things.It saves lots of time.And we can
fine everything on the internet,so we don't have to look all over
the shop just for something special.
On the other hand,it also has some disadvantages,We don't
know the quality of items.And we don't know how it really looks
like.We can hardly choose the day we get the item.We must take
all this risk and pay for it.We can only imagine how it looks like,
how big it is and how the weight of it is.
In my opinion,shopping on the internet is not necessary
We can find everything you need in supermarkets,shops or
somewhere else.Sometimes you see something special on the
internet,you really want it.But actually,you may not want to use
it,and you just buy it,because using the computer is easier than
going to the shop and sometimes talk to the shop assistance
It turns you into a lost control person.until you get the item you
may say:"Oh!dear,I must lose my mind."
改了，总的来说，还不错，注意从句的顺序要用正常语序。
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I always thinking that shopping on line is a teenage thing.
In fact,it's not.My parents fell in love with it.
They even have a VIP card of the XX Onlineshop.I think shopping on the
inter...

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I always thinking that shopping on line is a teenage thing.
In fact,it's not.My parents fell in love with it.
They even have a VIP card of the XX Onlineshop.I think shopping on the
internet is necessary in our lives.There are many advantages in shopping on line.
We needn't to bring any bags or even drive a car to
the supermarket just for a few of goods.That saves a lots of time.We can
find anything on the Internet,so that we needn't to look it over,
the shop does everything well.
On the other hand,There are some disadvantages with it,We always don't
know the real quality of items.And we don't know what is it really look
like.We hardly make choices When we got the item.We must take
all this risks and pay for it.What we can do is imagining how is it look like,
how big it is,andwhat the weight is.
In my opinion,shopping on line is not necessary
We can find anything you need in the supermarkets,shops or
somewhere else.Sometimes you see special goods on the internet, may be you think you really want it.But actually,you may not be gonna use
it,if you just buy it,because shoping on line is easier than
you go to the real shops, and sometimes,when you are talking to the shop assistance
before you get them,you may be say:"Oh!my god,I just lost my mind."
ps:楼主的翻译作业吧，直接用翻译器翻译的吧，这次我就帮你了，下次别叫我看出来，好好学习才是王道！

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I always think that shopping on the internet is (a)teenage thing.
obviously,(it)is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop(shopping).
they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.(加引...

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I always think that shopping on the internet is (a)teenage thing.
obviously,(it)is not.My mother and father are in love with online shop(shopping).
they even have a VIP card of the XX shop.(加引导词That)I feel like(去掉like ) shopping on the
internet is necessary in our lives.Shopping on the internet has
many advantages,We don't have to bring any bags or drive a car to
supermarket just for a few things.It saves a lots of time.And we can
fined (find)everything on the internet,so we don't have to look all over
the shop just for something special.
on the other hand,it also has some disadvantages,We don't
know the quality of items.And we don't know how(改为what) is it really look
like.We can hardly choice (choose) the day (when)we get the item.We must take
all this risks and pay for it.We can only imagine how is(去掉is) it look(looks) like,
how big is it(it is),and how's(what's) the weight of it.
In my opinion,shopping on the internet is not necessary
We can find everything you(we) need in the supermarket,shop or
somewhere else.Sometimes you see something special on the
internet,you really want it.But actually,you may not gonna (改为make)use
(of)it,and(but) you just buy it,because using the computer is easier than
you go to the shop and sometimes talk(talking) to the shop assistance(assistant)
It's turn(turned) you into a lost control person.until you get the item you
may say:"Oh!dear,I must lost (lose)my mind."

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I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.
obviously,(it)is not.My mother and father are(were) in love with online shop.
they even have(had) a VIP card of the XX shop.I fee...

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I always think that shopping on the internet is teenage thing.
obviously,(it)is not.My mother and father are(were) in love with online shop.
they even have(had) a VIP card of the XX shop.I feel (that) shopping on the
internet is necessary in our lives.
(on one hand,)Shopping on the internet has
many advantages.(such as)We don't have to bring any bags or drive a car to
supermarket just for a few things(and)It saves a lots of time.(Furthermore) we can
find everything on the internet,( we don't have to )without look(ing) (for) all over
on the shop just for something special. on the other hand,it also has some disadvantages,We don't know the quality of items.And we don't know how is it really look
like.We can hardly choice the day we get the item.We must take
all this(these) risks and pay for it.We can only imagine (that) how(what) it looks like,
how big it is,and how the weight is.
In my opinion,shopping on the internet is not necessary
We can find everything you need in the supermarket,shop or
somewhere else.Sometimes you see something special on the
internet,(and)you really want it.But actually,you may not gonna use
it,and you just buy it,because using the computer is easier than
(that)you go to the shop and (that) sometimes you talk with the shop assistance.
It (doesn`t) turn(s) you into a person (who) losts control until you get the item.(then) you
may say:"Oh!dear,I must lost my mind.

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