下面是我的作文,麻烦大家帮我修改一下...Lei Feng and Norman BethuneSince I was a child I heard a lot of stories about Lei Feng and Bethune. They were famous for their kindness. Both of them were fond of helping others. Their stories mo

下面是我的作文,麻烦大家帮我修改一下...Lei Feng and Norman BethuneSince I was a child I heard a lot of stories about Lei Feng and Bethune. They were famous for their kindness. Both of them were fond of helping others. Their stories mo
下面是我的作文,麻烦大家帮我修改一下...
Lei Feng and Norman Bethune
Since I was a child I heard a lot of stories about Lei Feng and Bethune. They were famous for their kindness. Both of them were fond of helping others. Their stories moved lots of people. Even if they have lots in common of helping others but there were still differences between them.
Lei Feng helped others without telling his name; spent his spare time on psychological counseling of primary school students and so on. Bethune was a respectable doctor, he saved soldiers for two days without sleeping. He also transfused to patients and said that his blood could be used for anyone. These two men had done a lot to others with asking for nothing in return. Moreover, Lei Feng did those things had nothing to do with his occupation, Bethune then did his own job.
As far though as I am concerned Lei Feng is a soldier that does anything he can to help people. Bethune is a great doctor who works on the front line in order to save soldiers.
In a word, Lei Feng and Bethune are helping people in different ways and for different reasons, both of them are admirable person.

下面是我的作文,麻烦大家帮我修改一下...Lei Feng and Norman BethuneSince I was a child I heard a lot of stories about Lei Feng and Bethune. They were famous for their kindness. Both of them were fond of helping others. Their stories mo
这二人有一定可比性,你到底是比同还是比异啊,主题句似乎侧重异,但有看不出异在何处,
doctor,he saved --------a comma fault
others with asking for nothing -----while asking
did those things had nothing ----which had
far though reasons,both of them are admirable person.----?

哥们，你的英语水平只有初中这么高