麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my f

麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my f
麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.

麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my f
第一行Maybe前面的逗号改成句号,At first前面的逗号改成句号.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意：逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.

If I have five million RMB, it is hard to say what I would do or not to do. Maybe I can change my life. Firstly, I would buy a big house for my family and I would bring all my family members to have a...

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If I have five million RMB, it is hard to say what I would do or not to do. Maybe I can change my life. Firstly, I would buy a big house for my family and I would bring all my family members to have a holiday after that. Then, I'll arrange a study plan and acquire as more training as possible. I think I don't have the capability to mange large amount of money. In the end, I have to go to work. There are so many friends in the company.

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biring ---bring 呵呵
my whole family ————my the whole family
I would biring my whole family have a holiday————I would have a romantic holiday with my family.
I think I don't ---I don't t...

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biring ---bring 呵呵
my whole family ————my the whole family
I would biring my whole family have a holiday————I would have a romantic holiday with my family.
I think I don't ---I don't think I......否定前移
more training —much training
我的也不一定对 但是我感觉如果让你写一个中文的作文，你也很困难
有些语句上下不是衔接在一起的，也就是不通顺，一起努力吧！

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bring