6级作文可以帮我改错吗E-BOOKS replace traditional books?Recently,I found the readers in libary were getting less than before.Most of the people prefer to read on the internet at home.With the information technic developing,E-books are more p

6级作文可以帮我改错吗E-BOOKS replace traditional books?Recently,I found the readers in libary were getting less than before.Most of the people prefer to read on the internet at home.With the information technic developing,E-books are more p
6级作文可以帮我改错吗
E-BOOKS replace traditional books?
Recently,I found the readers in libary were getting less than before.Most of the people prefer to read on the internet at home.With the information technic developing,E-books are more popular than the traditional books.
Some of the people think that E-books will replace the traditional books.First,the E-books are no cost for the readers,because they can just click the IE and read what they are interested in directly; All the E-books are free.
Second,E-books are more convenient for readers,they can read them at any time,no matter daylight or midnight.They can find there target books fastly,because the searching tools on the Internet are high efficient.
Third,E-books are easy to keep.The readers can download the E-books to their own local computer easily.It will just take up a little bit space of the computer.
By my opinion,although E-books have lots of advantages,I still love the traditional books.I like the feeling of reading at the balcony.I like to face a traditional book but not the computer screen.

6级作文可以帮我改错吗E-BOOKS replace traditional books?Recently,I found the readers in libary were getting less than before.Most of the people prefer to read on the internet at home.With the information technic developing,E-books are more p
because they can just click the IE and read what they are "interesting" in directly; All the E-books are free.
interested是对人感兴趣,而interesting是对物感兴趣
It just take up a little bit space of the computer.
这句话事实上是不需要will的,如果加也可以.
整体来说这篇文章不错啊!
我也很喜欢面对书本,而不是电脑,因为我觉得看真正的书更能感染人,书本的味道我很喜欢呢!
对了!你可以给最后一段加一句话!事实上书有一个绝对性的优势!就是书本是没有辐射的,而电脑有辐射啊!^_^I'm just kitting but you still can add it in!

没有问题，是正确的！相信自己！

没有错啊