请帮忙检查呵修改一篇英语作文!My problemMy problem is about my keys.I pften forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worrie about me.They tnink their money will be lose.Also somet

请帮忙检查呵修改一篇英语作文!My problemMy problem is about my keys.I pften forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worrie about me.They tnink their money will be lose.Also somet
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My problem
My problem is about my keys.I pften forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worrie about me.They tnink their money will be lose.Also sometimes when I go out,my keys are still in the room.It takes me difficult to gei into the room.I must use the key from my parents.Then they will punish me .I feel terrible.

请帮忙检查呵修改一篇英语作文!My problemMy problem is about my keys.I pften forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worrie about me.They tnink their money will be lose.Also somet
第一行的pften改成often 第二行的worrie 改成worried 第三行的 lose改成lost 都是些简单的语法错误..

My problem is about my keys.I often forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worried about me.They think that their money will be lost.Either ...

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My problem is about my keys.I often forget where they are.So I spend much time finding it.Sometimes I can't find it,my parents will be worried about me.They think that their money will be lost.Either sometimes when I go out,my keys are still in the room.It takes me difficult to get into the room.I must use the key from my parents.Then they will punish me .I feel terrible
改得不多，写的错误不多

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My problem
My problem is about my keys.I often forget where I put them,so I always spend too much time finding them.When I can't find them,my parents will be worry about that because they think t...

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My problem
My problem is about my keys.I often forget where I put them,so I always spend too much time finding them.When I can't find them,my parents will be worry about that because they think the money in our home maybe lose.And sometime when I go out,I left my keys in the room.It takes me difficult to get into the room.I have to wait my parents to open the door.Then they will punish me.I think it is terrible.
I don't know what you really want to express,the article seems too simple.Maybe you can add something else,I think.

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