求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.Dear Dr’Smith ,I’m Liming,chairman of the University union.The annual foreign language festival is about to begain .I’m writing this let

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.Dear Dr’Smith ,I’m Liming,chairman of the University union.The annual foreign language festival is about to begain .I’m writing this let
求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.
Dear Dr’Smith ,
I’m Liming,chairman of the University union.
The annual foreign language festival is about to begain .I’m writing this letter on behalf of the Student Union,inviting you to attend the opening ceremony of the Foreign Language Festival ,an annual event at this university ,and give a speech at the ceremony.
The theme of this year’s Foreign Language Festival is crossing the cultural gap and I believe your presence and speech at the opening ceremony will give us the best example of cross culture communication .I consider it a great honor if you could come to the event.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely
L

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.Dear Dr’Smith ,I’m Liming,chairman of the University union.The annual foreign language festival is about to begain .I’m writing this let
我按照我的主观想法改了一下.有好多词还是和我现在的语言习惯有点差异,没有中文提示不敢多改.
Dear Dr. Smith,
I’m Liming, chairman of the University union.
The annual foreign language festival is about to begin .I’m writing this letter on behalf of the Student Union. We hope you can attend the opening ceremony of the Foreign Language Festival, and giving a speech at the ceremony. It is an annual event at this university.
The theme of this year’s Foreign Language Festival is crossing the cultural gap. I believe your presence and speech at the opening ceremony will give us the best example of it. I consider it as a great honor if you could come to the event.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely
L

I consider it a great honor if you could come to the event.
最好改成I will appreciate it if you could come to the event.