看看下面的文章有哪些错误,My college lifeI have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom

看看下面的文章有哪些错误,My college lifeI have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom
看看下面的文章有哪些错误,
My college life
I have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom .There are no fixed seats or fixed classrooms .There are a lot of optional course .At college every day I attened four or six period of lessons .Sometime do experments,after class I often study in library ,Many magazines and books here are very helpful.But many students don’t know how to arrange their time ,they often spend their valuable time playing computer games.
In my spare time ,I like sports ,such as play tennis and ping-pong .I also like make friends .Now I have made many friends ,we eight girl students from difference parts of country share one dormitory .We like talk about our life at college and life in the future .We often have a lot of fun together .
I think the most important thing at college is that how arrange our voluble time and acquire as much knowledge as possible .I believe I can make greater progress in my study .
In a word ,I enjoy my college life very much.

看看下面的文章有哪些错误,My college lifeI have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom
这是我发现的问题,可能不全啊,
第一句STAY改成STAYED,第二句建议全改,错得太多,改为College life is quite different from high school life.第三句MOST改为BIGGEST.第七局SOMETIME改为SOMETIMES,且此句缺少主语,加主语WE吧
第二段开头SUCH AS后因该加动词ING形式.MAKE FRIENDS应为MAKING FRIENDS,因为此处这个词组是作为名词使用的.we eight girl students from difference parts中DIFFERENCE应为DIFFERENT这两个词前者为名词,后者为形容词,楼主可以注意区别一下.下一句TALK改为TALKING
第三段从句中应为HOW TO ARRANGE...
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