谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.Hello,everyone.I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a

谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.Hello,everyone.I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a
谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.
Hello,everyone.
I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a Korean.I think no matter what other people say,do me the most beautiful!I also like reading books,I think I can learn a lot of things.I also like to travel,because travel can make people humble.My hobby is debate,I participated in this months the school debate tournament.I think the debates can exercise my eloquence.
This is me.Do you want to make friends with me?
That’s all.Thank you.

谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.Hello,everyone.I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a
Hello, everyone.
I am an outgoing girl. one of my maint features is a pair of small eyes. My mother always says I laugh eyes with my eye ball unseen,but I don’t think so. There are a lot of people say I am like a Korean. I think no matter what other people say, be a true girl!I also like reading books,because I think I can learn a lot of things from reading. I also like to travel,because travel can make people humble. My hobby is debating, I participated in the school debating tournament in this month . I think the debates can improve my eloquence.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
That’s all. Thank you
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第二句话有毛病。there be +V.ing形式。 do me the most beautiful 换成I just be myself.reading books 与后面的句子中缺少连词，也可以换成from which I can get a lot of knowledge。my hobby is debate 与下文缺少连词。时间状语in this month 置于句末。exercis...

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第二句话有毛病。there be +V.ing形式。 do me the most beautiful 换成I just be myself.reading books 与后面的句子中缺少连词，也可以换成from which I can get a lot of knowledge。my hobby is debate 与下文缺少连词。时间状语in this month 置于句末。exercise 换成 improve my eloquence skills。that 最好加上去别省略 如果是口语表达的话，连词也可不加。

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