找出下面这篇英语短文的语法错误Chinese traditional musicHello everyone!I like music.Music has many sorts:soft music is graceful,rock music is fast,classical music is great,light music is relaxing,and children music is interesting.You ca

找出下面这篇英语短文的语法错误Chinese traditional musicHello everyone!I like music.Music has many sorts:soft music is graceful,rock music is fast,classical music is great,light music is relaxing,and children music is interesting.You ca
找出下面这篇英语短文的语法错误
Chinese traditional music
Hello everyone!I like music.Music has many sorts:soft music is graceful,rock music is fast,classical music is great,light music is relaxing,and children music is interesting.You can pick and choose whatever you like.I like Chinese folk music best.Because it's traditional music of China.There're lots of instruments like erhu,guzheng and pipa.They are really different from the western instruments.They can take you to many years ago.Now popular songs are in fashion.You can like popular songs.But do not forget Chinese folk music.
I played the erhu in my primary school.They are all made of bamboo[bæm'bu:].They had faint fragrance .I played it.The nice sound made me comfortable and I enjoyed the music.Just like I am going for a walk on a path.Nice music can help me study and have good rest.
Would you like to try to play the erhu?I think we should protect our traditional things like Beijing opera.So,we should teach Chinese traditional music when we was a child.
Do you like traditional music?Can you play the fragrance.If you can't.Maybe I can teach you!

找出下面这篇英语短文的语法错误Chinese traditional musicHello everyone!I like music.Music has many sorts:soft music is graceful,rock music is fast,classical music is great,light music is relaxing,and children music is interesting.You ca
1.it's traditional music of China 改成it's the traditional music of China
2.They can take you to many years ago.把某人带回到过去的什么时候应该用take sb back to 的短语They can take you back to many years ago
3.I played the erhu in my primary school.They are all made of bamboo[bæm'bu:].They had faint fragrance .I played it.The nice sound made me comfortable and I enjoyed the music.Just like I am going for a walk on a path.这儿的时态很不一致,你在小学的时候拉二胡用过去时是对的,可是你后面描述二胡的时侯时态却不一致了,可以用过去时,也可以用现在时,但是必须一致的,但是看你整段话的意思,还是用过去时更好.
Just like I am going for a walk on a path.是个错误的句子.改为I just felt that I was going for a walk on a path." have good rest"应该改为have a good rest
we should teach Chinese traditional music when we was a child.很显然你要表达的是“在我们很小的时候,我要必须被教中国传统音乐”,而你的句子却是在“在我们小的时候,我们必须教音乐（显然是教别人）”而且你的动词“was"也用的不正确,改为we should be taught Chinese traditional music when we are a child.
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Just like I am going for a walk on a path.还是改成I felt like I am going for a walk on a path.
when we are a child.也不对的么 可以说when we are in childhood.