请人帮忙改下雅思作文..快要考试了!Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address.We have reached the stage where they only way to protect the environment is at an international level.To what

请人帮忙改下雅思作文..快要考试了!Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address.We have reached the stage where they only way to protect the environment is at an international level.To what
请人帮忙改下雅思作文..快要考试了!
Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address.
We have reached the stage where they only way to protect the environment is at an international level.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemen
Nowadays,whether environment issues are too big for individual countries and individual people to address has become the topics of dicussion.Speaking for myself,I tend to agree that enviornment issues have posed a threat to people.and people are facing to the only way to protect the environment and it also becomes an international level.
The main reason for this is the environment pollutions.Notably,with the staggering growth of population,more and more resources are being used by different methods ,which has given rise to many pollutions.The best example is water pollutions.because of this,global popole are short of water resource to live and cultivate .Consequencely,it leads to the lacking of food .What’s worse,ther are more and more people who fight against hungry.So pollutions should be noticed by global
Secondly,environment problems are changing the global climates.For instance,the exhausted gases which are released by transport anf factory,nevertheless,have changed the climat for many years since last century.Like CO2,CO1 and SO2 and so forth.All of this are changing the global climates.More specifically,the global warming has been an government killer which has caused the finance crisis.governments are paying billions of expenses for dealing with many kinds of environment issues every year
Inaddtionly,environment problems are threating the inhabitants of animal resources.According to the survey,millions of species are now in the trend to extinguish.I convincely believed that they have rights to live in the earth.We have no rights to do that.Animal are the Wealth of the world
To sum up ,there is no denying that the earth and people are based on the environment.People and government should be aware of this awareness and put it into pracetices but not to just think about it .The environment issues should be resolved by people all around world
晕..手打的好多单词都打错了 ..郁闷!给各位批改造成不解..见谅!最好给估个分数!

请人帮忙改下雅思作文..快要考试了!Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address.We have reached the stage where they only way to protect the environment is at an international level.To what
Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address.
We have reached the stage where there is only way to protect the environment at an international level.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays,(whether不需要因为你不是问问题） environment issues are too big for individual countries and individual people to address has become the topic of discussion.Speaking for myself,I tend to agree that (environmental) issues have posed a threat to people(humanity?).(Now,) people (have only one choice) to protect the environment( at the international level).
The main reason for this is (the pollutions of the environment).Notably,with the staggering growth of population,more and more resources are being used by different methods ,which has (led) to many polluting (problems).The best example is water pollution. (For this reason,) global people are short of water resource for (living and cultivating) .Consequently, (the problem) leads to the lacking of food .(Furthermore, )there are more and more people who fight against hungry.(Thus,) pollutions should be noticed by global

Secondly,environmental problems are changing the global climate.For instance,the exhausted gases (,such as CO2,CO1, SO2, etc,) which are released by transportation and factory. Nevertheless,these problems have been causing the climate change for many years since last century.(不用这句 All of this are changing the global climates.因为之前你已经说了）More specifically, the global warming has been an government killer which has caused the( financial )crisis.governments are paying billions of expenses (to deal) with many kinds of environment issues every year

Additionally,environmental problems are (threatening) the inhabitants of animal (resources?).According to the survey, millions of species are now in the trend (of being extinguish) .I convincingly believed that they have the rights to live on the earth.We have no rights to destroy them.Animal are the Wealth of the world

To sum up ,there is no denying that( the earth and people are based on the environment感觉之用the natural environment is important to the existence of humanity会好一点 ).People and governments should be aware of this awareness and put it into practiced and not only thinking about it .The environment issues should be resolved by people all around world
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满分是一百的因该有八十多左右吧.我感觉就一些example不是很详细,然后有一些词比较repetitive...不要有多余的句子~还有一些就句子不是挺连贯~建议放一些transition word 比如 additionally,contrary等等
呵呵.其实我也不知道实际的情况所以给的评语只是建议而已
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