帮我看看这篇英语作文的错误,I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.My families

帮我看看这篇英语作文的错误,I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.My families
帮我看看这篇英语作文的错误,
I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.
Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I just know I unfortunate ago.But I finally know what true happiness is.Happiness is have a sweet warm home.
happiness

帮我看看这篇英语作文的错误,I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.My families
I thought I wasn't happy.But I think I'm very happy now.Because I hava a sweet and warm home.Although I don't have a father,I hava a mother who lovers me and a grandmother who loves me too.My families always do their best to me.They always stand on my side.Before,I only know that my misfortune.Finally,I khow what the truw happiness is.Happiness is to have a sweet and warm home.
我粗略看了一下,帮你改了一些明显的错误.注意,although和but不能联用.你应该还是一个初中生吧.

I thought I wasn’t happy,but think I'm happier now,
because I have a sweet warm home. Although I don’t have father ,but I have a mother who loves me.My grandmother who loves me ,too.
My fam...

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I thought I wasn’t happy,but think I'm happier now,
because I have a sweet warm home. Although I don’t have father ,but I have a mother who loves me.My grandmother who loves me ,too.
My family always do what is best to me.They are always on my side.
I thought I was unfortunate before,but I finally know what real happiness is.Happiness is having a sweet warm home.

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I thought I wasn’t happy.But think I'm very happy now.
Because I have a sweet and warm home. Although I didn’t have father , I have a mother who loves me very much.And a grandmother who loves m...

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I thought I wasn’t happy.But think I'm very happy now.
Because I have a sweet and warm home. Although I didn’t have father , I have a mother who loves me very much.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I just know how unfortunate I was before.But I finally know what true happiness is.Happiness is have a sweet and warm home.
语义不太清楚，句子与句子之间连接不好，只是给你纠正了一下明显的错误。

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although和but不能联用。