语法有什么错误,Dad,please ride your bicycle to work I want to say to my Dad.He is very fat.He usually go to work by his own car.Something withont faults will never be found.Although car is very convenient ,it is very harmful to his health.Beca

语法有什么错误,Dad,please ride your bicycle to work I want to say to my Dad.He is very fat.He usually go to work by his own car.Something withont faults will never be found.Although car is very convenient ,it is very harmful to his health.Beca
语法有什么错误,
Dad,please ride your bicycle to work
I want to say to my Dad.He is very fat.He usually go to work by his own car.Something withont faults will never be found.Although car is very convenient ,it is very harmful to his health.Because of this,he becomes fatter and unhealthier.I think he should ride his bicycle to work.First,Our home is near his company.it`s no need to by car.Then,ride bicyle is good for his health.Although it is tired,it`s a way of lose his weight.Keep trying no matter how hand it seems,it will get easier.I think you can,Dad .I believr you.
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语法有什么错误,Dad,please ride your bicycle to work I want to say to my Dad.He is very fat.He usually go to work by his own car.Something withont faults will never be found.Although car is very convenient ,it is very harmful to his health.Beca
He usually go to work by his own car.
改为：He usually goes to work in his own car.
a,he是主语单数第3人称,谓语要用goes.
b,by后面如果跟交通工具,中间不可以用任何东西.比如说你那句by his own car是不正确的,要不然就是by car,要不然就是in his own car.
Although car is very convenient
改成Although the cars are very convenient
car没有理由不加冠词,这里用复数表示.
it`s no need to by car.
改成There's no need to go by car.
to后要用动词连接,还要用there be 句型.
ride bicyle is good for his health.
改成Riding bicycles is good for his health.
a.ride 是动词,做主语要用动名词形式
b.bicycle是可数的,这里用做复数.
it`s a way of lose his weight
改成it's a way of losing his weight
of是介词,后面接动词应该用动名词形式.
Keep trying no matter how hand it seems,
hand改成hard.这是拼写错误.我就不多说了.
I believe you.
改成I believe in you
believe sb.是相信某人的话,并不指信任某人
believe in sb.才是指信任某人.