关于汉语热的英语作文麻烦帮我修改一下语法错误As an international language ,English can be seen anywhere ,However ,at present ,it raises a storm of foreigner’s learning Chinese at home and abroad .The heat is still going up.What

关于汉语热的英语作文麻烦帮我修改一下语法错误As an international language ,English can be seen anywhere ,However ,at present ,it raises a storm of foreigner’s learning Chinese at home and abroad .The heat is still going up.What
关于汉语热的英语作文麻烦帮我修改一下语法错误
As an international language ,English can be seen anywhere ,However ,at present ,it raises a storm of foreigner’s learning Chinese at home and abroad .The heat is still going up.
What’s the reason a apart of foreigners say ,learning a language which completely different in their mother language is an enjoyable challenge .And someone says ,he just likes Chinese culture ,but maybe the essential reason is that china developed quickly in economical and so many aspects ,these years ,and the close cooperation with other country.
As a Chinese ,I’m very proud of this condition .I know that any country all can’t ignore can’t ignore the influence of Chinese culture .but at the same time ,we should be aware of it clearly that Chinese become international language need more efforts.

关于汉语热的英语作文麻烦帮我修改一下语法错误As an international language ,English can be seen anywhere ,However ,at present ,it raises a storm of foreigner’s learning Chinese at home and abroad .The heat is still going up.What
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As an international language , English can be seen anywhere ,However , at present , it raises a storm of foreigner’s TO Chinese at home and abroad . The heat is still going up.
What’s the reason ?A part of foreigners say ,learning a language which completely different FROM their mother language is an enjoyable challenge . And someone says , he just likes Chinese culture , but maybe the essential reason is that CHINA developed quickly in economical and so many OTHER aspects these years , and the close cooperation with other COUNTRIES.
As a Chinese , I’m very proud of this condition . I know that any country can’t ignore the influence of Chinese culture . but at the same time , we should be aware of it clearly that IT NEEDS MORE EFFORTS FOR Chinese TO become international language .

作为一种国际语言,英语可以发生在任何地方,然而,目前,它就提出了一阵外国人学习汉语在家和在国外。热仍将上涨。 是什么原因?一个分离的外国人士表示,学习一门语言,完全不同的母语是件令人愉快的挑战。有人说,他只是喜欢中国文化,但也许是中国的根本原因在经济迅速发展,很多方面,这些年来,和密切合作,其他的国家。 作为一个中国人,我非常骄傲这个状况。我知道,任何国家都不能忽视不能忽视中国文化的影响,但与...

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作为一种国际语言,英语可以发生在任何地方,然而,目前,它就提出了一阵外国人学习汉语在家和在国外。热仍将上涨。 是什么原因?一个分离的外国人士表示,学习一门语言,完全不同的母语是件令人愉快的挑战。有人说,他只是喜欢中国文化,但也许是中国的根本原因在经济迅速发展,很多方面,这些年来,和密切合作,其他的国家。 作为一个中国人,我非常骄傲这个状况。我知道,任何国家都不能忽视不能忽视中国文化的影响,但与此同时,我们应该意识到中国清晰的成为国际语言需要更多的努力。

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anywhere前面不能用介词。
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As an international language , English can be seen anywhere ,However , at present , it triggers a following trend of Chinese -learning home and abroad . The flow is still .expanding.
What’s the re...

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As an international language , English can be seen anywhere ,However , at present , it triggers a following trend of Chinese -learning home and abroad . The flow is still .expanding.
What’s the reason ? Parts of foreigners say ,learning a language which is completely different from their mother language is an enjoyable challenge . And some others say , they just have a keen on Chinese culture , but maybe the essential reason is that china develops quickly in economic and so many other aspects during these years , and develops the harmonious cooperation with other countries.
As a Chinese , I’m very proud of this condition . I know that any country can’t ignore the influence that Chinese culture brings out . But at the same time , we should be aware clearly that Chinese becoming international language needs more efforts.

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修改的地方用了大写，包括有些地方标注了原因，未标注原因的纯属是觉得语感上的差别。
As an international language, English can be seen EVERYWHERE. However, at present, there is a storm THAT the foreigners are keen on learning Chinese raisin...

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修改的地方用了大写，包括有些地方标注了原因，未标注原因的纯属是觉得语感上的差别。
As an international language, English can be seen EVERYWHERE. However, at present, there is a storm THAT the foreigners are keen on learning Chinese raising at home and abroad. And the heat is still going up. So what's the reason? Some of the foreigners say that learning a language which IS(定语从句缺少了谓语动词） completely different from their mother language is a enjoyable challenge. And someone also says, he just likes the Chinese culture. But the essential reason MAY BE that China developed quickly in economics(economical是形容词，名词应该是economics） and many other aspects these years, and also the close cooperation with other COUNTRIES（不止一个国家了）.
As a Chinese, i'm very proud of this STORM. I know that THE OTHER COUNTRIES can't ignore the influence of Chinese culture. But at the same time, we should be aware of it clearly that IT(名词性主语从句） still needs a lot of efforts for Chinese to become an international language.

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