英文自我介绍求修改Hello!My name is XXX.My forename is Stephen.I am twelve years old .And I'm in grade 7 now.My hobby is playing table-tennis and badminton.I usually spend time on doing handwriting at my recess time.And I am a sagittarius.The
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英文自我介绍求修改Hello!My name is XXX.My forename is Stephen.I am twelve years old .And I'm in grade 7 now.My hobby is playing table-tennis and badminton.I usually spend time on doing handwriting at my recess time.And I am a sagittarius.The
英文自我介绍求修改
Hello!My name is XXX.My forename is Stephen.
I am twelve years old .And I'm in grade 7 now.
My hobby is playing table-tennis and badminton.I usually spend time on doing handwriting at my recess time.And I am a sagittarius.
There are four members in my family,They are my grandmother,fother,mother and me.
My father is a military.He works at Nanjing .My mother is a nurse.She always cooks delicious foods for us.We all like reading books.
That's all about me.Thank you for your attention.
里面肯定有很多语法错误,但我不会改,
请把修改过的正文回答给我.
英文自我介绍求修改Hello!My name is XXX.My forename is Stephen.I am twelve years old .And I'm in grade 7 now.My hobby is playing table-tennis and badminton.I usually spend time on doing handwriting at my recess time.And I am a sagittarius.The
forename-englishname 这个不能说你用的不对,只能说不够口语化
recess—spare/free 这个也是不够口语化
They are my grandmother,fother,mother and me.
没必要加上They are my军人的话一般不常用 military,这个我认为有点倾向于指美国大兵……用soldier好了
works at 把at 改成in
Thank you for your attention.attention改成listening