谁能帮我改正我的英语作文语法错误..非常谢谢了In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of

谁能帮我改正我的英语作文语法错误..非常谢谢了In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of
谁能帮我改正我的英语作文语法错误..非常谢谢了
In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of the book that I think it was very interesting and exciting. The Singing Day in the book was a very a part of climax in the story that was making me engrossed it, and it was my favorite part in the story. There was a cliffhanger In the Singing day that encouraged me to continue to end of book. When bad Mayor caught Lina that I thought Lina would die; although, it just a book that I was worrying about Lina when I read about this part and it was so stimulating and theatrical. I may feel my heart-throb is very quick that it was like a movie flashing in my mind. when Lina escaped from the mayor that the lights was went out, she came to the top, she burst through the door to the roof and ran out. Doon was standing the way to river and waiting for Lina. I could felt that how much Doon was worrying about Lina and his feeling.
Although it was a science fiction book but I thought that there was a part of story that smeller in our life. Lina and Doon were best friends, they had explored the back alleys and dimly lit edges of the city, but they began to grow apart because a little stupid thing that Lina laughed at Doon. I can remember when I was much younger that I had a best friend, we were always playing with each other, but one thing happened which that cause our friendship almost broke up. I cannot remember why I argued with him but must be a little thing, I could felt my heart beating difficult like a stone on my heart that caused I cannot breathe anymore. As time goes by we seemed become strangers which that I forgot his name.
I thought the author very good at detail that there were many turning points made the story more interesting and thrilling. Those turning points were decisions that Lina and Doon made, and I thought those turning points worked very well. However, author still left some doubt points for readers. I thought those doubt points may tell readers in the sequel such as what happened before they migrate to underground city. I was very curious about what happen in the sequel, so that I had fantasy. They would find a new city that so difference between ember, and they would meet more people and solve more problems, also they would help more people. For guessing that they may get marry and have many children.
我的是过去式所以 呵呵 我写的很垃圾 所以难看懂 麻烦了 虽然就100分 我想我应该还有点 嗯 非常感谢
同时谢谢你的付出 哪怕你只是看了一眼
thx so much for everything!

谁能帮我改正我的英语作文语法错误..非常谢谢了In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of
I have finished reading a very good book named City of Ember before the end of my school year comes.This was the second book that I have read that year and it was a very good book.There was a part of the book that I think interesting and exciting.The Singing Day mentioned in the book was one of the most important climaxes during the story which i was dedicated in and loved best.There was a cliffhanger In the Singing day that encouraged me to keep reading until the end of book.I thought Lina would die when bad mayor caught her,even although I was clear that it was just a plot in the book.But it was indeed so stimulating and theatrical that I could not help being worryed about Lina when I was completely addicted in this part .I thought it was,maybe,because of my quick heart-throb,the plots sometimes flashed quickly and vividly in my mind just as i was watching a real movie.When Lina escaped from the mayor with lights off ,she came to the top,burst through the door to the roof and ran out at last while Doon kept waiting for her to get the way to river.I could alomost feel how much Doon worried about Lina.
\x05Although it was just a science fiction book there was a part of story that smeller in our life.Lina and Doon were best friends,they had explored the back alleys and dimly lit edges of the city,but they began to grow apart because of a little stupid mater that Lina laughed at Doon.I remember when I was much younger that I had a best friend,we were always playing with each other,but one thing happened which almost destoried our friendship .I cannot remember why I argued with him but that must be a little mattet .I could felt my heart beating so difficult like there was a stone in it that caused I cannot breathe anymore.As time goes by ,we seemed become strangers which I could not tell his name.
\x05I thought the author was very good at describing details that there were many turning points which made the story more interesting and thrilling.Those turning points were decisions that Lina and Doon made that worked well.However,author still left some questions for readers.I thought those doubt points may tell readers in the sequel such as what happened before they migrate to underground city.I was very curious about what happen in the sequel,so I had fantasy.They would find a new city which was so different from ember,and they would meet more people and solve more problems,also they would help more people.For guessing that they may get marry and have many children.
要注重基本功,很多的常用的词组和搭配、时态的用法.还有,翻译英文不是根据中文直接翻译,要注意语境和英语的使用环境,像那个turning points ,明显的中文式的英语.多注意基本功,要打扎实.good luck

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At the end of the school year, I read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I had read that year and it was a very good one indeed.. There was a part of the book that I thi...

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At the end of the school year, I read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I had read that year and it was a very good one indeed.. There was a part of the book that I think was very interesting and exciting. The Singing Day in the book was the very part of climax in the story that made me engrossed, and it was my favorite in the story. There was a cliffhanger In the Singing day that encouraged me to continue to the end of the book. When the bad Mayor caught Lina, I thought Lina would die; although, it was just something in a book , I was worried about Lina when I read about this part. It was so stimulating and theatrical that I could have felt my heart beating so fast that it was like a movie flashing in my mind. when Lina escaped from the mayor that the lights went out, she came to the top, she burst through the door to the roof and ran out. Doon was standing somewhere near the river waiting for Lina. I could feel how much Doon was worried about Lina .
Although it was a science fiction book I thought that there was something that is similar to what we have in real life. Lina and Doon were best friends, they had explored the back alleys and dimly lit edges of the city, but they began to grow apart because of a little stupid thing Lina laughed at Doon. I can remember when I was much younger I had a best friend, we were always playing with each other, but one thing happened which that caused our friendship almostto break up. I cannot remember why I argued with him butit must have been something trivial, I could feel my heart beating so difficultly as if there were a stone on my heart that made it hard for me to breathe. As time goes by we seem to have become such strangers that I don't even remember what his name is..
I thought the author very good at giving details. There were many turning points that made the story more interesting and thrilling. Those turning points were the decisions that Lina and Doon made, and I thought those turning points worked very well. However, the author still left some doubtful points for readers. I thought those doubts may tell readers in the sequel something like what happened before they migrated to the underground city. I was very curious about what would happen in the sequel. They would find a new city that was so different and they would meet more people and solve more problems. They would help more people. And I can guess that they may get married and have many children.

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In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of the book that I...

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In the end of school year, I have been read a very good book called City of Ember. This was second book that I have been read that year and it was a very good book. There was a part of the book that I think it was very interesting and exciting. The Singing Day in the book was a very a part of climax in the story that was making me engrossed it, and it was my favorite part in the story. There was a cliffhanger In the Singing day that encouraged me to continue to end of book. When bad Mayor caught Lina that I thought Lina would die; although, it just a book that I was worrying about Lina when I read about this part and it was so stimulating and theatrical. I may feel my heart-throb is very quick that it was like a movie flashing in my mind. when Lina escaped from the mayor that the lights was went out, she came to the top, she burst through the door to the roof and ran out. Doon was standing the way to river and waiting for Lina. I could felt that how much Doon was worrying about Lina and his feeling.
Although it was a science fiction book but I thought that there was a part of story that smeller in our life. Lina and Doon were best friends, they had explored the back alleys and dimly lit edges of the city, but they began to grow apart because a little stupid thing that Lina laughed at Doon. I can remember when I was much younger that I had a best friend, we were always playing with each other, but one thing happened which that cause our friendship almost broke up. I cannot remember why I argued with him but must be a little thing, I could felt my heart beating difficult like a stone on my heart that caused I cannot breathe anymore. As time goes by we seemed become strangers which that I forgot his name.
I thought the author very good at detail that there were many turning points made the story more interesting and thrilling. Those turning points were decisions that Lina and Doon made, and I thought those turning points worked very well. However, author still left some doubt points for readers. I thought those doubt points may tell readers in the sequel such as what happened before they migrate to underground city. I was very curious about what happen in the sequel, so that I had fantasy. They would find a new city that so difference between ember, and they would meet more people and solve more problems, also they would help more people. For guessing that they may get marry and have many children

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