这个英语作文有哪些地方错了?Bethune,the famous doctor,was born in 1890.3.3rd.He is from Canada.Little Bethune hoped he will be a doctor like his grandfather.In 1911,he was studied at the University of Toronto.And he had a lot jobs,like re
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这个英语作文有哪些地方错了?Bethune,the famous doctor,was born in 1890.3.3rd.He is from Canada.Little Bethune hoped he will be a doctor like his grandfather.In 1911,he was studied at the University of Toronto.And he had a lot jobs,like re
这个英语作文有哪些地方错了?
Bethune,the famous doctor,was born in 1890.3.3rd.He is from Canada.Little Bethune hoped he will be a doctor like his grandfather.In 1911,he was studied at the University of Toronto.And he had a lot jobs,like reporter,waiter and teacher.In 1938,he came China.He helped China builded many hospital,and helped many soldier and pool men.He was very friend.He was Liu Bochen's friend.In 1939.11.12th,he was dead at the village of Huang Shikou.
这个英语作文有哪些地方错了?Bethune,the famous doctor,was born in 1890.3.3rd.He is from Canada.Little Bethune hoped he will be a doctor like his grandfather.In 1911,he was studied at the University of Toronto.And he had a lot jobs,like re
1、第一行末尾的will改成would.
2、第一行中is from 改成was from
3、第一行in 1890.3.3rd改成on 1890.3.3rd
4、第二行studied 改成studying.
5、第二行末 a lot 改成a lot of
6、第三行came China改成came to China.
7、第三行helped China builded 改成helped China build
8、第四行头hospital 改成hospitals
9、第四行soldier改成soldiers
10、第四行friend->friendly
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the改为a
is from 改为comes from因为这是一个客观的事实，所以不能用过去式；另外，没有is from这个说法，只有
come from
第二行中的
will改为would
was 去掉
第三行中的
had 改为did,had 是中式译...
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第一行中的
the改为a
is from 改为comes from因为这是一个客观的事实，所以不能用过去式；另外，没有is from这个说法，只有
come from
第二行中的
will改为would
was 去掉
第三行中的
had 改为did,had 是中式译法，不地道
a lot 改成a lot of
第四行中的
came China改成came to China
hospital 改为hospitals
第五行中的
soldier改成soldiers
friend改为friendly
第六行中的
was dead改为died
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