帮忙修改英语 自我介绍Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm

帮忙修改英语 自我介绍Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm
帮忙修改英语 自我介绍
Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm a famer's daughter.I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl.About eight years old.I konw most of you were born in good families.And you are so yong than me.Maybe you've never experienced those.But I did.That was so hard.But also that was intresting.I planted rice seedlings,grew crops,potatos,all kinds of vegetables and kept chicken,ducks,and pigs.That made my childhood rich and colorful.The second thing that I'm gonna say is my little pets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats will make me comfottable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life.Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a great time this term.

帮忙修改英语 自我介绍Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm
Hi everyone.My name is .So lucky that I learnt with youtogether last semester.You've already known a lot about me.
Today I'm going to tell you about myself that you didn’tknow.
First,I was born in a small town.My parents are allfarmers.So I'm a farmer’s daughter.I had begun to do the farm works when Iwas a little girl of eight years old.I knowmost of you were born in good families.And you are so younger than me.Maybe you'venever experienced those,but I did.It was so hard,but interesting.I plantedrice seedlings,grew crops,potatoes and all kinds of vegetables,and keptchicken,ducks,and pigs.All these farm works made my childhood rich andcolorful.
The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats willmake me comfortable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I canhave all kinds of cats in my entire life.
Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a greattime this term.
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注：Cats compensated for lack of my life.这句话没看懂想说啥,所以没改.

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Hi eveyone . My name is ~. so lucky I learned ~ with you together last semester. You've already known about me. Today I'm gonna tell you about the me that you haven't known before. I was born in a sma...

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Hi eveyone . My name is ~. so lucky I learned ~ with you together last semester. You've already known about me. Today I'm gonna tell you about the me that you haven't known before. I was born in a small town. My parents are all farmers. So I'm a famers' daughter. I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl. About eight years old, I konw most of you were born in good families, and you are much younger than me, maybe you've never experienced those before. But I did. That was so hard. But again that was interesting. I planted rice seedlings, grew crops, potatoes, and all kinds of vegetables; and I also kept chicken, ducks, and pigs. That made my childhood enjoyable and colorful. The second thing that I'm gonna say is about my little pets. I love cats, and I have 4 cats. When I suffer from loneliness, cats will make me comfottable. So I spend the whole weekend being with my cats. Cats keep me company and enrich my life. I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life. Anyway thank you for listening. I wish we could have an even greater time this term.

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应该木有错吧。。。。。。

可以这样翻译 大家好，我的名字是。。。。非常幸运上了学期能与您共同学习英语，你已经很了解我了，今天我要告诉你关于我你还不知道的一面。我出生于一个小镇，我的父母亲都是农民，所以我是一个农民的女儿。在我很小的时候就开始干农活了，大约八岁吧。我知道你大概出生在一个家境优越的家庭。而且你比我小多了。或许你永远都不会体会我所经历的东西。但是我能体会。那是如此的艰难。但是同时也是也很有趣。我种过...

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可以这样翻译 大家好，我的名字是。。。。非常幸运上了学期能与您共同学习英语，你已经很了解我了，今天我要告诉你关于我你还不知道的一面。我出生于一个小镇，我的父母亲都是农民，所以我是一个农民的女儿。在我很小的时候就开始干农活了，大约八岁吧。我知道你大概出生在一个家境优越的家庭。而且你比我小多了。或许你永远都不会体会我所经历的东西。但是我能体会。那是如此的艰难。但是同时也是也很有趣。我种过水稻、玉米以及各种各样的蔬菜，养鸡、养鸭，还喂过猪，这是我的童年是那么丰富、多姿多彩。第二件事就是要谈谈我的宠物。我喜欢猫，我有四只猫，如果我感到孤独，小猫们就会安慰我。所以我整个周末都是和小猫呆在一起。小猫填补我的生活空白。我希望我的生活都有猫的陪伴。另外非常感谢你的聆听。我希望我们这个学期能过得愉快。

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Hi everyone . My name is ~. so lucky I learned ~ with you together last semester. You've already known over me. Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know. I was born in small town. My p...

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Hi everyone . My name is ~. so lucky I learned ~ with you together last semester. You've already known over me. Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know. I was born in small town. My parents are farmers. I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl. About eight years old. I know most of you were born in good families. And you are so young than me. Maybe you've never experienced those. But I did. That was so hard. But also that was intresting. I planted rice seedlings, grew crops, potatos, all kinds of vegetables and feed chicken, ducks, and pigs. That made my childhood rich and colorful. The second thing that I'm gonna say is my little pets. I have 4 cats. If I suffer from loneliness, cats will make me comfortable. So I often play with my cats on weekends. Cats are my friends can't be substituted. I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my retired life. Anyway thank you for listening. I wish we could have a great time this term.
不好改，我不知道你想表达什么，里面单词语法都有错误，结构也有问题，形容词因为我不知道你的意图，很难改恰当。建议去看下同义词之间的细微差距。

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问题挺多的，I was born in small town. 你想说你出生在一个城镇 这句应该加上“a”，I was born in a small town
I konw most of you were born in good families（我知道你出生在良好的家庭）改I know you were born in a good family.
I hope I ca...

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问题挺多的，I was born in small town. 你想说你出生在一个城镇 这句应该加上“a”，I was born in a small town
I konw most of you were born in good families（我知道你出生在良好的家庭）改I know you were born in a good family.
I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life这句表达不清楚 你想说明猫在你生命中的重要性 但是表达不明确 试试用这句I hope I can have a variety of cat in my life.
你说你这句 cats will make me comfottable 是想说猫填补了我生活的不足应该把
（cats will make me comfottable）改成（The cat has filled my life）还有( I konw most of you were born in good families ) 这句你想表达什么?
你是初中的？？

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