英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..The present society,different people have different hobbies.For example:singer.Like singing,like painting painter,dancer like dancing ...In mid

英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..The present society,different people have different hobbies.For example:singer.Like singing,like painting painter,dancer like dancing ...In mid
英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..
The present society,different people have different hobbies.For example:singer.Like singing,like painting painter,dancer like dancing ...
In middle school,many people have their own hobbies,like to play computer games,reading magazines,books,and sports.
Good hobbies are good for us.My hobby is reading,though very boring,but in learning is really helpful.
But all of the interest is a waste of time,but as long as we make a reasonable time arrangement,or right.
Hobbies can bring happiness,in boring when they listen to music,read a magazine when tired.Can make us very happy.
So,anyone to have true love,because it will make life more perfect!

英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..The present society,different people have different hobbies.For example:singer.Like singing,like painting painter,dancer like dancing ...In mid
The present society前面加个in
singer,dancer都要加s
like to play computer games换成such as playing.
though it`s very boring, but in learning it is really helpful.
but as long as we make a reasonable .but去掉
in boring when they listen to music, read a magazine when tired. 这句换成“when they`re boringor tired,listening to music and reading can make us happy."
anyone to have true love 这里to不要
唉,累死了,记得采纳,好评哦!

In the present society, different people have different hobbies. For example: a singer likes singing, a painter likes painting, and a dancer likes dancing ...
In middle school, many people hav...

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In the present society, different people have different hobbies. For example: a singer likes singing, a painter likes painting, and a dancer likes dancing ...
In middle school, many people have their own hobbies, such as playing computer games, reading magazines or books, and doing sports.
Good hobbies are good for us. My hobby is reading, and though it seems boring, it is really helpful for learning.
But every interest means a waste of time. As long as we make reasonable timetable, it doesn't, does it?
Hobbies can bring happiness. When we are bored listening to a piece of music, reading a magazine when tired can make us very happy. (cheer us up)
So, everyone has to have their true love, because it will make life happier. (perfect一词是没有比较级和最高级的）

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In the present society, different people have different hobbies. For example: singers like singing, painters like painting , dancers like dancing ...
In middle schools, many people have their own ...

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In the present society, different people have different hobbies. For example: singers like singing, painters like painting , dancers like dancing ...
In middle schools, many people have their own hobbies, such as playing computer games, reading magazines, books and exciencing.
Good hobbies are good for us. My hobby is reading, though it is very boring, it really helps me on learning.
However, all of the interest is a waste of time unless we make a reasonable time to arrange it right.
Hobbies can bring happiness, especially when we were bored, we should working on our hobbies like reading a magazine, or when we were tired, we should working on our hobbies like listen to the music. They can make us very happy.
Anyone who have true love on their hobbies, he / she will make life more perfect!

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