自己写的 帮看看有什么错误When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finis

自己写的 帮看看有什么错误When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finis
自己写的 帮看看有什么错误
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who were involved in some special cases .I suppose the day like that makes me delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
麻烦帮看看时态有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？

自己写的 帮看看有什么错误When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finis
When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I get （got) assignments from the editor and go (went) out to take some unforgettable
photographs with a professional photographer who
(would) assist me in finishing the task. And I (had) interviews (with) some people who were involved in some special cases .
I (believe that ) the (time I spent) like that made me enjoyable,
and the job as a journalist is admirable and unusual in my life.

第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？—— 不可以。
在When I was a student后面加一个过去的时间。
在 Every morning 前面加一个 Now，另起一行。
把I will interview some people who were involved in...中的 were 换成 are 就好了。

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第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？—— 不可以。
在When I was a student后面加一个过去的时间。
在 Every morning 前面加一个 Now，另起一行。
把I will interview some people who were involved in...中的 were 换成 are 就好了。
写的不错。继续努力！

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1.And I will interview some people who were（are） involved in some special cases
2. when i was a student 最好别去掉