麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of

麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of
麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误
Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of community and government,eventhough the efforts by the children themselves.In my oppinion,the best place to teaching a child to this society is a school.
Parents,as the first teachers in children's life ,their education is definetily necessary,due to children were influenced deeply by their parents and easily copy the behaviours from their parents.A child would not be a harmful peaple to this community if their parents were good members.
However,it could not be denied the effects by schooling were more useful than parenting.The school itself is a mini society,there are a lot of teachers and classmates are from different locations,having different backgrounds and personalities.Students have to communicate with these person if they want study in the school.They should learn how to co-operate with others which can improve their social skills and communication skills.
Although parents indeed need to teach children to be good citizens,but this is not all duty of parents.The better place to learn these things is the school apparently.

麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of
Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need (needs)efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of community and government,eventhough(though去掉) the efforts by the children themselves.In my oppinion（opinion）,the best place to teaching (teach)a child to this society is a school.
Parents,as the first teachers in children's life ,their education is definetily necessary,due to(改为because) children were influenced deeply by their parents and easily copy the behaviours from their parents.A child would not be a harmful peaple（person） to this community if their parents were good members.
However,it could not be denied (加上that)the effects by schooling were more useful than parenting.The school itself is a mini society,there are a lot of teachers and classmates are（去掉are或在前加who） from different locations,having different backgrounds and personalities.Students have to communicate with these person if they want study in the school.They should learn how to co-operate with others （这里加上逗号构成非限制性定语从句）which can improve their social skills and communication skills.
Although parents indeed need to teach children to be good citizens,but （去掉but）this is not all duty of parents.The better place to learn these things is the school apparently.

楼上回答的很好，我来做一点补充。1、the best place to make a child fit this society is a school.
2. Parents,as the earliest teachers in children's life ,whose education is definetily necessary, play an important pa...

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楼上回答的很好，我来做一点补充。1、the best place to make a child fit this society is a school.
2. Parents,as the earliest teachers in children's life ,whose education is definetily necessary, play an important part in forming children's characteristics because children were influenced deeply by their parents and can easily copy the behaviours from their parents.
3. A child won't be a harmful peaple（person）to his community if his parents are good members.（这里不是非真实条件）
4.it can not be denied (加上that)the effects by schooling are greater than that by parenting.（整个文章是一般现在时）
5. if they want to study in the school
6.Although parents do need to teach children to be good citizens,but （去掉but）it is not the duty of parents alone to do so

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• Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important （in） a child's growing procees.It （needs） efforts from every level of the society to achieve the purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of community and government,(as well as ) the efforts of the children themselves.In my (opinion),(the best  learning place is society,which is the best  school for a child.
  ) 
  Parents,as the first teachers in children's life (,their education is definetily necessary.) children were (deeply influenced)  by their parents and(  copy their behaviours ).(generally speaking,a) child (won't) be harmful  to this community if their parents (are) good members.
   
  However,it (can't)be denied (that)the effects of schooling (are) more useful than parenting.The school itself is a mini society(.) There are teachers and classmates() from different locations,having different backgrounds and personalities.Students (need) to communicate with (them) if they want(to) study in the school. They should learn how to co-operate with others(,) which can improve their social skills and communication skills.
   
  Although parents indeed need to teach(their) children to be good citizens,()this is not  (only Parental responsibility).(parently),the better place to learn these is the school.