英语作文修改语法可以了,看能不能把句子重新修改一下,长短句相接,更加有逻辑性,善于用连接词.Practising the long jumpLast Friday afternoon,in the playground,we had a PE lesson.We learned how to do the long jump.Our

英语作文修改语法可以了,看能不能把句子重新修改一下,长短句相接,更加有逻辑性,善于用连接词.Practising the long jumpLast Friday afternoon,in the playground,we had a PE lesson.We learned how to do the long jump.Our
英语作文修改
语法可以了,看能不能把句子重新修改一下,长短句相接,更加有逻辑性,善于用连接词.
Practising the long jump
Last Friday afternoon,in the playground,we had a PE lesson.We learned how to do the long jump.Our teacher taught us the skill about the long jump.Then he set us an example.Although I felt nervous,I still jumped as my teacher taught me.At first,I failed,but I didn’t give up.At last,I jumped over 3 metres long.I made it.This experience let me understand a saying“Persevering means victory.”

英语作文修改语法可以了,看能不能把句子重新修改一下,长短句相接,更加有逻辑性,善于用连接词.Practising the long jumpLast Friday afternoon,in the playground,we had a PE lesson.We learned how to do the long jump.Our
Last Friday afternoon,we had a PE lesson in the playground,during which we learned how to do the long jump.To begin with,our teacher taught us the skill about the long jump and asked us to bear it in mind.Then he set us an example.Although I felt nervous then,I still jumped as my teacher taught me.At first,I failed,but I didn’t give up.At last,I jumped over 3 metres long.I made it and i'm so delighted that my hardwork has paid off.This experience let me understand a saying“Persevering means victory.”

Practising the long jump
Last Friday afternoon,we had a PE lesson in the playground.What makes us happy
is that we learned an difficult but interesting sports which called long jump.At the be...

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Practising the long jump
Last Friday afternoon,we had a PE lesson in the playground.What makes us happy
is that we learned an difficult but interesting sports which called long jump.At the beginning,our teacher taught us the skill about the long jump. Then he set us an example. Feeling nervous,though,I still jumped as my teacher taught me. After first try, I faied as expected but I didn’t give up.I practised over and over again,getting extremely tired.Finally, I jumped over 3 metres long.After so many times tries,I made it! This scarce experience made me understand a old saying “Persevering means victory.”

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Practising the long jump
Last Friday afternoon, we had a PE lesson on the playground. We learned to do the long jump. Our teacher taught us the skill about the long jump by setting us an example....

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Practising the long jump
Last Friday afternoon, we had a PE lesson on the playground. We learned to do the long jump. Our teacher taught us the skill about the long jump by setting us an example. Although I felt nervous, I still jumped as my teacher taught me. I failed the first time but I didn’t give up, which turned out to be right because I jumped over 3 metres long at last. I made it. This experience let me understand the saying “Persevering means victory.”.

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