大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?翻译这句中文： 我最大的优点是热心肠、外向,有时我喜欢读报纸,当我得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己

大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?翻译这句中文： 我最大的优点是热心肠、外向,有时我喜欢读报纸,当我得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己
大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?
翻译这句中文： 我最大的优点是热心肠、外向,有时我喜欢读报纸,当我得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己最大的努力捐款并呼吁朋友加入进来,帮助他人不仅很有意义,而且也逐渐成了我的生活习惯.在我闲暇时间,我喜欢旅游、打羽毛球以及与朋友交流.定期的锻炼让我保持健康、充满活力和乐观的心态.
My greatest merit is I am a girl with warm-hearted and outgoing. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper.And when I know someone sufferingfrom serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I will do my best todonate and appeal my friends to attend this activity.Helping others is not only meaningful , it could also gradually turn into a living habit of mine. In myspare time, I like traveling, playing badminton and communicating with friends.Regular exercises keep me in good health, full of energy and optimism.
上述翻译的英文有哪些错误呢? 大师能更标准的重新翻译上述的中文么?

大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?翻译这句中文： 我最大的优点是热心肠、外向,有时我喜欢读报纸,当我得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己
My greatest merit is I'm a warm-hearted and outgoing girl.Sometimes I read the newspaper,and when I know someone is suffering serious illness or having no money for school,I try my best to help them.Not only contribute my own power,but also I appeal my friends to attend together.Helping others has gradually grown into a living habit of mine.In myspare time,I like traveling,playing badminton and chatting with friends.Regular exercises not only bring me good health,but also full energy and optimistic mood.
中文语法也有错.喜欢就是喜欢,没有有时喜欢,有时不喜欢的说法.
中文修改：我最大优点是我是个热心肠和外向的女孩.有时我读报纸,当得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己大努力帮助他们,我不仅自己捐款给他们,我也号召身边的朋友一起帮助他们.帮助别人已经逐渐成为我的生活习惯.闲暇时间,我喜欢旅游、打羽毛球及与朋友聊天.定期锻炼不仅带给我健康的身体,也带给我充沛的活力和乐观的心态

My greatest merit is I am a warm-hearted and outgoing girl. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper. And when I know that someone is suffering from serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I w...

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My greatest merit is I am a warm-hearted and outgoing girl. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper. And when I know that someone is suffering from serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I will do my best to donate and appeal my friends to attend this activity. Helping others is not only meaningful, it could also gradually turn into my living habit. In myspare time, I like traveling, playing badminton and communicating with friends. Regular exercises keep me in good health, and full of energy and optimism.
稍微改了一点点，其他还都挺好的～

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高一的英文水平吧，但还看得懂。不需要改什么。