帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized somet

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized somet
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,
Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized something suddenly,He brought fishes went to the river.And put them in the river.The fishes were very happy,Thomas felt happy too.

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fish.He liked them very much.He tried to feed them some fish food.But they didn’t eat any more.Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy,so,he realized somet
接楼上的
Thomas‘s 改为 Thomas’
any more 改为 at all
He brought 前改为句号
And put 前改逗号,and小写
Thomas felt happy too前为句号

Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fishes. He liked them very much. He tried to feed them some fish food. But they didn’t eat any more. Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy, so, he realized som...

全部展开

Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fishes. He liked them very much. He tried to feed them some fish food. But they didn’t eat any more. Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy, so, he realized something suddenly, He brought fishes to the river. And put them into the river. The fishes were very happy, Thomas felt happy too

收起

Thomas‘s 改为 Thomas’
Thomas felt happy too前为句号
gold fish 改为goldfish
其他的应该不用改了啊

Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fishes. He liked them very much. He tried to feed them some fish food. But they didn’t eat at all. Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy, then he realized some...

全部展开

Thomas’s uncle bought him two gold fishes. He liked them very much. He tried to feed them some fish food. But they didn’t eat at all. Thomas thought the gold fishes were unhappy, then he realized something suddenly. He took the fishes to the riverside, and put them into the river. The fishes were very happy, Thomas felt happy too.

收起