雅思作文,我刚写的,The charts give us information about the number of usa marriage and divorce between 1970 and 2000 and percentage of adults.The fist chart,marriage was the most people amount in 1970,it had about 2.5 millions；on the other h

雅思作文,我刚写的,The charts give us information about the number of usa marriage and divorce between 1970 and 2000 and percentage of adults.The fist chart,marriage was the most people amount in 1970,it had about 2.5 millions；on the other h
雅思作文,我刚写的,
The charts give us information about the number of usa marriage and divorce between 1970 and 2000 and percentage of adults.
The fist chart,marriage was the most people amount in 1970,it had about 2.5 millions；on the other hand ,the number of divorces was the least ,it had about 1 millions amount.By 1980,the amount of marriages is the most ,it had 2.5 millions amount,it was same as in 1970 marriages's amount .In 1990 group,marriages had about 2.4 millions；in contrast ,divorces had about 1.1 millions number.By 2000,the quantity of marriages was decrease to 2 millions amount,and divorces's number was same as 1970 divorces's number.
The second chart is manifest percentage of adults.In 1970 and 2000,the number of marred had the highest proportion ,it was 70 percent ,and about 58 percent.While ,divorced percentage was lostest in1970,it was about 1percent ,by 2000,divorced's amount increase to 8 percent.
Overall,as the time passes ,marriages's amount was go down ,but it also was the most people number.
是剑六test4的小作文。

雅思作文,我刚写的,The charts give us information about the number of usa marriage and divorce between 1970 and 2000 and percentage of adults.The fist chart,marriage was the most people amount in 1970,it had about 2.5 millions；on the other h
饼状图是吧 我雅思写作7分 帮你看看
1.首先USA要大写
2.percentages要复数
3.in contrast ,divorces had about 1.1 millions number.改成in contrast ,divorces had the number of 1.1 millions approximately.
4.Overall,as the time passes ,marriages's amount was go down 改成was going down
5.but it also was the most people number.改成but it still was the highest in the number of people.
写的还可以 6到6.5那样

不用amount