请帮忙修改这篇英语作文的错误语法.Today,my parents are not at home,I want to do something meaningful.First of all,I must finish my homework,because I can't let parents worried about my study.Second,I like mother,then wash clothes,I cle

请帮忙修改这篇英语作文的错误语法.Today,my parents are not at home,I want to do something meaningful.First of all,I must finish my homework,because I can't let parents worried about my study.Second,I like mother,then wash clothes,I cle
请帮忙修改这篇英语作文的错误语法.
Today,my parents are not at home,I want to do something meaningful.First of all,I must finish my homework,because I can't let parents worried about my study.Second,I like mother,then wash clothes,I cleaned the room again,let the home becomes very clean.Finally,I need to make a wonderful parents,they came back for dinner,I hope I can give them a surprise,let them know that their children very sensible.When I finish these afterwards,I believe I grew up.

请帮忙修改这篇英语作文的错误语法.Today,my parents are not at home,I want to do something meaningful.First of all,I must finish my homework,because I can't let parents worried about my study.Second,I like mother,then wash clothes,I cle
Today,my parents are not at home,I want to do something meaningful.First,I finish my homework,because I don't want to let parents worried about my study.Then,I wash clothes and clean the room to make the house very clean.Finally,I need to make a wonderful dinner for my parents.I hope that I can give them a surprise.I want them to know that their child is very sensible.

整体时态应该用过去时较好.使某人失望，可以说let sb. down.
第二点要说的是什么意思？不太明白呢。make my house clean.
finally 中的 I would like to make a wonderful dinner for my parents before they come back.
let them know that their...

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整体时态应该用过去时较好.使某人失望，可以说let sb. down.
第二点要说的是什么意思？不太明白呢。make my house clean.
finally 中的 I would like to make a wonderful dinner for my parents before they come back.
let them know that their children very sensible:and let them know that their kid has the ability of independence.
I believe I have grown up!

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错的太多了，每一句都有两处以上错误，您别改了，再写一篇吧