求修改.如果有语法或用词方面的错误,i died tomorrow.内容自由发挥.If I died tomorrowIf I died tomorrow?Never did I think about this problem before I hear Molly assign us compose an article about it.But if I do died tomorrow,what th

求修改.如果有语法或用词方面的错误,i died tomorrow.内容自由发挥.If I died tomorrowIf I died tomorrow?Never did I think about this problem before I hear Molly assign us compose an article about it.But if I do died tomorrow,what th
求修改.如果有语法或用词方面的错误,
i died tomorrow.内容自由发挥.
If I died tomorrow
If I died tomorrow?Never did I think about this problem before I hear Molly assign us compose an article about it.But if I do died tomorrow,what things I would do?Spending the last day with my lover,parents,and other I am familiar with?Or doing some I haven’t finished things?Perhaps I would do these things several days ago.But now I won’t,because something happened have made me change.
Several days ago,when I went to buy some books,I saw a kid use a bicycle ran down a dog in a high speed.What a cruel scene!The dog couldn’t move after the kid crash the dog three times.I was astonishment.No wonder the dogs don’t be our best friends?Why the kid can treat the dog in such a terrible way?
Today,another impressed me a lot thing happened on the morning.I was having my English class.Suddenly,I heard a big sound.Then I saw a student lying on the ground,bleeding.I was astonishment again.After the class,I heard of the student was a postgraduate,and he(she) jumped from the 4th floor and died after he(she) jumped.
Perhaps the things are ordenary in someone’s mind because these things happen everyday.But for me,they are unusual.I think no matter which age we are in,we should respect all the life in heart,not in a cruel way.Only in this way can we have a better life,a better environment,a better the next generation.
So if I died tomorrow,I would respect my life,other animals,all the living things,until tomorrow.

求修改.如果有语法或用词方面的错误,i died tomorrow.内容自由发挥.If I died tomorrowIf I died tomorrow?Never did I think about this problem before I hear Molly assign us compose an article about it.But if I do died tomorrow,what th
If I died tomorrow?Never did I think about this problem until I hear Molly assign us to compose an article about it.But if it were true,if I were to die tomorrow,then what things would I do?Spend the last day with my lover,parents,and others I am familiar with?Or to fihish the things I left half-done?Perhaps I would do these things if it were several days ago.But now I won’t.Because something happened that have made me change.
Several days ago,I was on my way to buy some books,when I saw a kid use a bicycle to ran over (or towards) a dog in a high speed.What a cruel scene!The dog couldn’t move after the kid crashed the dog three times.I was astonished.Is it not said that dogs are our best friends?How could the kid treat the dog in such a terrible way?
Today,another thing that impressed me a lot happened in the morning.I was having my English class.Suddenly,I heard a big sound.Then I saw a student lying on the ground,bleeding.I was astonished again.After the class,I heard that the student was a postgraduate,and he(she) jumped from the 4th floor and died.
Perhaps these things are ordinary in some people's eyes because they happen everyday.But to me,they are unusual.I think no matter which age we are in,we should respect all the lives in heart,not treat life cruelly .Only in this way can we have a better life,a better environment,a better next generation.
So if I died tomorrow,I would respect my life,other animals,all the living things,until tomorrow.