谁能帮我改改这篇文章啊?改语法就行My college life My name is Zhang Yichun,from Guilin.19 yers old.I am very pleased to be a college student.I like my college life,because it is such a wonderful time in my youth.I was born in the remote

谁能帮我改改这篇文章啊?改语法就行My college life My name is Zhang Yichun,from Guilin.19 yers old.I am very pleased to be a college student.I like my college life,because it is such a wonderful time in my youth.I was born in the remote
谁能帮我改改这篇文章啊?改语法就行
My college life
My name is Zhang Yichun,from Guilin.19 yers old.
I am very pleased to be a college student.I like my college life,because it is such a wonderful time in my youth.I was born in the remote countryside in a small village,where not a good educational environment.In high school I am eager to college life,and now my college life began.Sometimes busy university life,but the free time a lot more than high school,maybe you will find college life boring.Because we do not know how to deal with the luxury of time.But I think college life will become wonderful.As long as the full use of its free time,you will make it more meaningful.
In my spare time,I can do part-time,reading books,listening to music,participate in community activities and so on.
College is to cultivate all-round talented person's.In university,not only to do well,but also the achievement to other aspect development.Firstly,in the course of study must learn to regulate itself,accompanying social competition,employment etc.Various contradictions alienating,college students under increasing pressure and only released their pressure,the entertainment study in learning to truly experience learning recreational fun creating an effective way of learning.Secondly,define their learning objective,only clearly why want to learn,understand the importance of studying,can inspire their own potential,positive to learn.Thirdly,pay attention to their professional knowledge,to continuously improve their ability of combining theory with practice.
College is studying a new beginning.In our college life,you can continue to learn more and better knowledge.The library is a good place for students who provide a good environment.If you want to show your talent and skills,you can participate in various activities,to exercise their own.
Beautiful environment of schools and teaching facilities.I believe that in such an environment of learning that I can be able to make great progress.I have to live up to their parents hope to three years in college learning a variety of knowledge and ability to fight to find a good job to return parents.
All in all,my college life will be very exciting and fulfilling.

谁能帮我改改这篇文章啊?改语法就行My college life My name is Zhang Yichun,from Guilin.19 yers old.I am very pleased to be a college student.I like my college life,because it is such a wonderful time in my youth.I was born in the remote
where there has poor educational environment.
I was eager for the college life,and now my college life begins.
sometimes university life is busy,but it is more free than that in high school.
deal with the free time.
But I think college life will become wonderful and meaningful,as long as you make the full use of the free time.
you will make it more meaningful(删除)
In my spare time,I do part-time,read books,listen to music,participate in community activities and so on.
In university,we should not only just do well,but also make the achievement to develop ourselves .
第四段完全不通,我没看明白是什么意思,所以这一段没法给你改了= =
College life is a new beginning.In college life,you can learn more and more knowledge.The library is a good place for students which provides a good environment.And also you can participate in various activities to show your talent and skills,or to exercise your own.
With beautiful environment and teaching facilities.I believe I can be able to make great progress .I should to live up to my parents' hope in three years in college,learning an amount of knowledge and gain abilities to fight for a good job in the award of my parents.
以上除了第四段,其他的大致改了,看得出你用的是在线翻译,这种机器化的东西到处都是错误,英语什么的还是要好好学的啊,大学里面学也不会晚啊,孩子~（你应该比我小,我就倚老卖老的称呼一声了~）

My college life
My name is Zhang Yichun of 19 years old from Guilin.
I am very pleased to be a college student. I like my college life, because it is such a wonderful time in my youth...

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My college life
My name is Zhang Yichun of 19 years old from Guilin.
I am very pleased to be a college student. I like my college life, because it is such a wonderful time in my youth. I was born in a remote countryside in a small village, where there is not a good educational environment. In high school I am eager to experience college life, and now my college life began. Sometimes I have a busy university life, but I have more free time than in high school. Maybe you will find college life boring, because we do not know how to deal with the luxury of time. But I think college life will become wonderful. As long as we make full use of our free time, we will make it more meaningful.
In my spare time, I can do part-time, reading books, listening to music, participate in community activities and so on.
College is to cultivate all-round talented people. In university, not only to do well, but also the achievement to other aspect development. Firstly, in the course of study must learn to regulate itself, accompanying social competition, employment etc. Various contradictions alienating, college students are under increasing pressure and only released their pressure, the entertainment study in learning to truly experience learning recreational fun creating an effective way of learning. Secondly, define their learning objective, only clearly why want to learn, understand the importance of studying, can inspire their own potential, positive to learn. Thirdly, pay attention to their professional knowledge, to continuously improve their ability of combining theory with practice.
College is studying a new beginning. In our college life, you can continue to learn more and better knowledge. The library is a good place for students who provide a good environment. If you want to show your talent and skills, you can participate in various activities, to exercise their own.
Beautiful environment of schools and teaching facilities. I believe that in such an environment of learning that I can be able to make great progress. I have to live up to their parents hope to three years in college learning a variety of knowledge and ability to fight to find a good job to return parents.
All in all, my college life will be very exciting and fulfilling.

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It's reflect 改为It reflects
his nusic have改成his music has（下面类似也有一处。）
symbolize 改为symbolizes
如果我动词单复数没有弄错的话，主语是xxx music不是应该谓语用第三人称单数形式么？
patriot是名词，所以说是：Chpin is a patroit.把very 改掉。

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It's reflect 改为It reflects
his nusic have改成his music has（下面类似也有一处。）
symbolize 改为symbolizes
如果我动词单复数没有弄错的话，主语是xxx music不是应该谓语用第三人称单数形式么？
patriot是名词，所以说是：Chpin is a patroit.把very 改掉。
希望不是乱改吧……

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同学，你的文章里不光有语法问题，还有很多语言习惯问题~~~~~~·
My college life
My name is Zhang Yichun, from Guilin. And I'm 19 yers old now.
I am very happy to be a college student. I love my college life,...

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同学，你的文章里不光有语法问题，还有很多语言习惯问题~~~~~~·
My college life
My name is Zhang Yichun, from Guilin. And I'm 19 yers old now.
I am very happy to be a college student. I love my college life, because it is such a wonderful time in my youth. I was born in the remote countryside in a small village without a good educational environment. I have been eagering to college life since I was in high school, and my college life begin now. Sometimes university life is busy, but I have more free time than that in high school. Maybe you will find college life boring, because we do not know how to deal with the leasure time. But I think college life will become wonderful,as long as you make full use of it, it will spice up your life.
In my spare time, I can do part-time job, read books, listen to music, participate in community activities and so on.
College can help to develop all-round abilites. Varities of abilities is equal important to studing well . （从这里往下你写的句子我几乎看不懂了，我就差不多的意思帮你写吧...）Firstly, you must give up your bad learning habit. With the increasing pressure, the only way for college student is to relax themselves is to learn in a more efffective way, making themselves to be more careative and to enjoy more. Secondly, make a clear learning plan, in which what you want to learn and why you want to leran it must be inclouded.Only in this way can you encourage yourself to learn it well. Furthermore, pay attention to practice,as they say that practice makes perfect to such an extent that appling theory to practice must be in consideration.
College is a new beginning. You can learn more knowledge to aborad your horizon here,and there is no wander that library is an ideal place for us. Besides, if you want to show your talent and skills, just do it by taking part in varities of activities.
With beautiful environment and teaching facilities, I believe I can make great progress during the four years. I'll pave the way to my future by myself and I'll never let my parents down.
总算还算通顺地翻译下来了... 中间那一段真的是看不懂啊... 我尽量按照你的意思翻译，不过看起来还算有点奇怪... 嘿嘿~~~

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