修改下这段英文语法The importance of the research is that the characteristics of china advertising wih media.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down a conservative ideas.And
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修改下这段英文语法The importance of the research is that the characteristics of china advertising wih media.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down a conservative ideas.And
修改下这段英文语法
The importance of the research is that the characteristics of china advertising wih media.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down a conservative ideas.And there are 9 hundred million farmer live in china.It's coming into being a advertisement environment with blindly or mechanically.why there are a lot of humour and cleverly advertising in the west?Becouse of the open-minded culture.It effect of a big difference between the chinese and foreign commercial advertisements.
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重点是中国媒体广告的特点.伴随着悠久的历史,中国不禁传承了传统美德,同样传承了保守的思想,另外中国有9亿的农民.这就形成了我国广告环境的盲目或者机械化.为什么西方有那么多的幽默和巧妙的广告?因为开放的文化.它影响了中国和外国之间巨大的广告文化差异.
修改下这段英文语法The importance of the research is that the characteristics of china advertising wih media.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down a conservative ideas.And
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The key point(关键;要点.importance是重要性,两者有点细微的差别) of the research is that the characteristics of Chinese(大写,另外此处应该用形容词) media of advertising(广告媒体).Developing with(随着...的发展) a long history ,the cultue of china has not only handed down(传递给后世) traditional virtues ,but also a conservative ideas(不用再重复了).There(and是用来连接句子的,最好别再一句话的开头用) are nine hundred million farmers(复数) live in china.It comes(不需要进行时) into being an(不是a) advertisement environment of blindness and mechanization(with 后面怎么能单独加副词呢?).Why are there(疑问句的语序) a lot of humour and perfect(巧妙的,极好的) advertisement(广告) in the west counties(加个countries比较好)?It is because of the open-minded culture.(because of 不能独立引导句子)It affects(effect是名词而非动词) Chinese advertising and brings about a huge(巨大的,比用big好一些) difference between the Chinese(大写) and foreign culture(文化) of advertisements.
其实还有很多可改之处,不过是要换换语序加一些连词,增加句子的复杂程度的,不知道你需不需要,所以就没改,希望帮得到你.
This research focuses on the characteristics of Chinese media advertisements.Being a country of such a long history, China not only passes down her traditional virtues, but also inherits some preserve...
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This research focuses on the characteristics of Chinese media advertisements.Being a country of such a long history, China not only passes down her traditional virtues, but also inherits some preserved thoughts. Moreover, China has 0.9 billion farmers who bear those preserved thoughts. This to a large extent leads to the blindness and mechanization of the environment of Chinese advertisements. On the contrary, the western world has created so many humorous and intelligent advertisements. Why? Because they have a tolerant culture which bring about the huge difference in advertisement culture between China and other foreign countries.
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The importance of the research is the characteristics of Chinese advertising media.With a long history, China not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down the conservative ideas....
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The importance of the research is the characteristics of Chinese advertising media.With a long history, China not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also has come down the conservative ideas. Besides there are 9 hundred million farmers living in china.It's coming into being a advertisement environment with blindly or mechanically. Why there are a lot of humour and clever advertisings in the west? Becouse of the open-minded culture. It effect of a big difference between the chinese and foreign commercial advertisements.
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The importance of the research is that the characteristics of chinESE MEDIA OF ADVERTISING.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also (has come down...
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The importance of the research is that the characteristics of chinESE MEDIA OF ADVERTISING.With a long history ,the cultue of china not only has come down traditional virtues ,but also (has come down a重复动词可省略,因为有BUT连接,ideas所以不要a) conservative ideas.(And 请勿将连词做开头)ADDITIONALLY, there are 9 hundred million farmer live in china.(It's coming into being这个过于恶心了)THOSE FACTS MADE OUR advertisement environment blind(ly)(or?)AND mechanical(ly). why (there are不怎么喜欢这个句型)IN THE WEST EXIST a lot of humour and cleverly advertising? (Because of the) open-minded culture IS THE ANSWER. It (effect)AFFECTS((这句不通啊,要么是创造了差异,要么就是影响了文化,去掉difference等或者AFFECTS改为CREATES) (of) a big difference between the chinese and foreign commercial advertisements.
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